#298: New Fedora flyer, or banner svg's for general usage - review request
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Reporter: zoltanh721 | Owner: saunders
Type: materials for ambassadors request | Status: new
Priority: major | Component: Other Artwork
Severity: Quick & Easy | Resolution:
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Comment (by saunders):
First, smaller image:
1. I'm a big fan of the general concept (put the Four Foundations side by
side)
2. There are some letter-spacing issues, most noticeable with the headers,
but also with the subtitles. In particular, the Features and First
subtitles overlap in places.
3. Typo: s/enginieering/engineering
4. Coolness subtitle: "Leaders, teams, everyone is just for you" should be
rephrased to better indicate the Friends Foundation (perhaps something
like "Be a leader, collaborate with a team, however you contribute you'll
find and make friends here!", as a rough idea)
4. I can't evaluate the Readiness subtitle because some of it is cut off
and there is an overlap with the Greatness subtitle.
(License for my contributions here: Creative Commons Zero Public Domain
Dedication)
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