#189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion ----------------------------------+---------------------------- Reporter: nightmoves | Owner: nobody Type: other artwork request | Status: new Priority: minor | Component: Other Artwork Severity: Quick & Easy | Resolution: Keywords: | Blocked By: Blocking: | ----------------------------------+----------------------------
Comment (by ryanlerch):
nightmoves,
I agree, maybe the following edit to that part of the Live CD sleeve will be more suitable: thoughts?
Old Text:
{{{ Please ensure that your computer is configured to boot from the CD drive, insert the disc into the CD drive, and restart your computer.
We hope that you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install it to your computer using the "Install to Hard Disk" icon [on the desktop | in the Activities menu].
For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org }}} ---------------------------------------------------------
My Edit:
{{{ This CD boots your computer directly into a fully functioning, yet temporary version of Fedora 17.
Please ensure that your computer boots from the CD drive, insert the disc into the CD drive, and restart your computer.
We hope that you enjoy using Fedora so much that you will want to install it permanently. Install Fedora to your computer by using the "Install to Hard Disk" icon [on the desktop | in the Activities menu].
For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org
}}}