[Design Team] #189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion

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#189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion
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Reporter:  nightmoves             |       Owner:  nobody       
    Type:  other artwork request  |      Status:  new          
Priority:  minor                  |   Component:  Other Artwork
Severity:  Quick & Easy           |    Keywords:               
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 Before we start printing/publishing stuff for the the F16 Sleeve Artwork
 I'd like to make a small suggestion about the content on the cover with
 respect to the F15s and so on that had this but doesn't seem right.

Where it says " We hope you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install it
 to your computer....".  The "If so" part makes it seem like a condition,
 wherein if you like using fedora, go ahead, else what?? Maybe we should
 have the "If so" part removed.

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#189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion
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Reporter:  nightmoves             |       Owner:  nobody
    Type:  other artwork request  |      Status:  new
Priority:  minor                  |   Component:  Other Artwork
Severity:  Quick & Easy           |  Resolution:
Keywords:                         |  Blocked By:
Blocking:                         |
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Comment (by ryanlerch):

nightmoves,

I agree, maybe the following edit to that part of the Live CD sleeve will
 be more suitable: thoughts?

Old Text:

{{{
 Please ensure that your computer is configured to boot from
 the CD drive, insert the disc into the CD drive, and restart
 your computer.

We hope that you enjoy using Fedora. If so, you can install
 it to your computer using the "Install to Hard Disk" icon
 [on the desktop | in the Activities menu].

For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org
 }}}
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My Edit:

{{{
 This CD boots your computer directly into a fully functioning,
 yet temporary version of Fedora 17.

Please ensure that your computer boots from the CD drive, insert
 the disc into the CD drive, and restart your computer.

We hope that you enjoy using Fedora so much that you will want to
 install it permanently. Install Fedora to your computer by using
 the "Install to Hard Disk" icon [on the desktop | in the
 Activities menu].

For further assistance, visit http://help.fedoraproject.org

}}}

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#189: F16 Sleeve Artwork suggestion
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Reporter:  nightmoves             |       Owner:  nobody
    Type:  other artwork request  |      Status:  closed
Priority:  minor                  |   Component:  Other Artwork
Severity:  Quick & Easy           |  Resolution:  invalid
Keywords:                         |  Blocked By:
Blocking:                         |
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Changes (by gnokii):

* status:  new => closed
 * resolution:   => invalid