Hey Jef,
     Here's the stuff I had worked on for the design-bounty.  I made the realese-notes banner smaller so that all four corners would be rounded (instead of the two on the left being chopped off).  The minibar allows for more content on subsequent pages.  I only kept the "features" bubble from the four-Fs since this document is all about new features - but it wouldn't be a big deal to swap it out with anything.  Finally, Mo had mentioned getting some screenshots on the document.  I pulled a picture of the BFO from the fedora Wiki and added a "dramatic" angle and drop shadow.  I hope this helps!  Let me know if you need help getting different headers into your OOo document (it took me a little while to figure out!).

:Daniel

--- On Sat, 6/5/10, Jef van Schendel <jefvanschendel@gmail.com> wrote:

From: Jef van Schendel <jefvanschendel@gmail.com>
Subject: [Design-team] F13 Feature Profiles (first design bounty) and introduction
To: design-team@lists.fedoraproject.org
Date: Saturday, June 5, 2010, 10:02 AM

Hi everyone,

I'm Jef (or Schendje on IRC and my new Fedora People account). I'm the one who wanted to give the first Fedora Design Bounty a shot as can be read here:

http://mairin.wordpress.com/2010/06/03/fedora-design-bounty-f13-feature-profiles/

So I made a first mock-up (work in progress!) which can be found here:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2061418/FedoraFeatureProfiles_mockup.7z

I included all the materials and sources I used. F13-feature-profiles_edit1.pdf is the main one, I also included an annotated version at F13-feature-profiles_edit1_notes.pdf.

Things I wondered about (besides the annotations):

- I follow a lot more of the Ubuntu world, and wasn't sure of any trademark designs Fedora uses. I quickly made a simple background, but have no idea if it fits with your brand. I used only the official Fedora colors though.
- How far I can go with the fancy-schmancy designs. I don't want to overdo it, because that would not only look bad but also get in the way of readability and such (mchua already pointed out the background might conflict with a black and white version, which is why blackWhiteTest.png is there).
- What's the final format I should design for? Will it be on paper, pdf, do I need to keep the margins for any printers, things like that?

I'd love to hear what you guys think. All comments/questions/remarks are welcome!

Jef

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