On 12/27/2009 04:48 AM, Caius 'kaio' Chance wrote:
(2009年12月27日 06:56), Máirín Duffy wrote:
> On Sat, 2009-12-26 at 14:53 -0500, Mel Chua wrote:
>>
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/File:Stars-with-rocketship_concept01.png
>>
>> Source at
>>
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/File:Stars-with-rocketship_concept01.svg
>>
>> I also put the image and svg source in the
>>
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F13_Artwork#Concepts.2C_WIP_Designs
>> gallery but I think I broke the table in doing so - it runs off the
>> right side of my screen now. (The F12 gallery does the same thing, so
>> I'm not sure how to fix this one.)
>
> zomg I love it! I wasn't sure how to get around the swirl issue but this
> does that beautifully!
IMHO how about more contrast and less objects? :P
+1, I also think there are too many elements in there, what the image is
about? stars? rocket? tree? Let focus on one element/idea and
de-emphasize the rest (not necessarily remove, just move the focus away)
--
nicu ::
http://nicubunu.ro ::
http://nicubunu.blogspot.com/