Hi Mo!
This is amazing work; a very awesome design!
- The memory requirement for Fedora 16 will be 768 MB of RAM.
- There is a typo that mentions Fedora 15 instead of Fedora 16.
- The screws in the window could be rotated a bit, and the bullseye
modified a bit to have more detail / more realism.
I hope this feedback helps; thanks for the great work!