On 08.09.2016 11:57, Brian Exelbierd wrote:
As this document was read-only, I responded in the corresponding issue: https://pagure.io/fedora-diversity/issue/4 On Wed, Sep 7, 2016, at 07:09 PM, Justin W. Flory wrote:Hey all, Earlier, Amita wrote a draft of an article to introduce and explain the Code of Conduct to a general audience on the Fedora Community Blog. I did a quick round of edits and wanted to gather some more feedback and comments from others about the proposed article. I'm also including the FPL and soon-to-be FCAIC to check this out too since I think this post is a big deal in helping broadcast an interpretation to our Code of Conduct. Want to make sure we get this shaped right from the start. :) https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/?p=2407&preview=1&_ppp=34f47b7611 Please let us know what your thoughts are, all. Thanks! -- Cheers, Justin W. Flory jflory7@gmail.com Email had 1 attachment: + signature.asc 1k (application/pgp-signature)_______________________________________________ Fedora Diversity Team mailing list diversity@lists.fedoraproject.org https://lists.fedoraproject.org/admin/lists/diversity@lists.fedoraproject.org
Coming from a native english speaker, it is apparent that some of the sentences are written by a non native speaker, while they still flow well a true grammar, structure critic may take hard aim on those, i presently am not on a machine with credentials to edit from the dashboard, but ask if another english speaker could edit those kinks, also is commblog AUTO g118'd ? if not we should consider some g118n team collaboration to make sure it reads well in ALL languages, this is after all our CoC and Diversity Teams' work. I'd Also consider either more prominently OR otherwise indicate that entirety of the article is essentially a copy / paste of the CoC itself. I'd also consider at the very least a plug to the Commops /Diversity / join Team pages as Commblog and some of us that re-post commblog articles are getting traffic hits form all walks and regions, some folks may understandably not be present Fedora Users /contributors and or otherwise unawares of where to go for getting involved.
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