On 08.09.2016 11:57, Brian Exelbierd wrote:
As this document was read-only, I responded in the corresponding
issue:
https://pagure.io/fedora-diversity/issue/4 [2]
On Wed, Sep 7, 2016, at 07:09 PM, Justin W. Flory wrote:
> Hey all, Earlier, Amita wrote a draft of an article to introduce and explain the Code
of Conduct to a general audience on the Fedora Community Blog. I did a quick round of
edits and wanted to gather some more feedback and comments from others about the proposed
article. I'm also including the FPL and soon-to-be FCAIC to check this out too since I
think this post is a big deal in helping broadcast an interpretation to our Code of
Conduct. Want to make sure we get this shaped right from the start. :)
https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/?p=2407&preview=1&_ppp=34... [1]
Please let us know what your thoughts are, all. Thanks! -- Cheers, Justin W. Flory
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Coming from a native english speaker, it is apparent that some of the
sentences are written by a non native speaker, while they still flow
well a true grammar, structure critic may take hard aim on those, i
presently am not on a machine with credentials to edit from the
dashboard, but ask if another english speaker could edit those kinks,
also is commblog AUTO g118'd ? if not we should consider some g118n team
collaboration to make sure it reads well in ALL languages, this is after
all our CoC and Diversity Teams' work. I'd Also consider either more
prominently OR otherwise indicate that entirety of the article is
essentially a copy / paste of the CoC itself. I'd also consider at the
very least a plug to the Commops /Diversity / join Team pages as
Commblog and some of us that re-post commblog articles are getting
traffic hits form all walks and regions, some folks may understandably
not be present Fedora Users /contributors and or otherwise unawares of
where to go for getting involved.
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