[diversity] Feedback for FWD pitch

[Dyuti reCursedd]

Hello Everyone,

I am trying to write a pitch for Fedora Women's Day 2018 for promoting the
event and attracting more contributors to organize the event. It would be
very helpful if you could go through and leave some feedbacks for me. Here
is the link to what I tried writing -
https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch

Regards,
Dyuti

[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Justin W. Flory]

On 05/16/2018 04:45 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
>  Hello Everyone,
>  
>  I am trying to write a pitch for Fedora Women's Day 2018 for promoting
>  the event and attracting more contributors to organize the event. It
>  would be very helpful if you could go through and leave some feedbacks
>  for me. Here is the link to what I tried writing
>  -https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch
>   
I wanted to follow up with this thread from some discussion from channel.

Some of us reviewed the existing draft so far and left some feedback in
the Etherpad. Dyuti is working through the feedback and will let us know
when it's ready for a final review. After this, we will work with her on
adding and scheduling it to the Community Blog.

Thanks for working on this, Dyuti! \o/

-- 
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com

[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Dyuti reCursedd]

Hello everyone,

Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the next
round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We are yet to
finalize the 'Important dates' section.
Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
<https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.

Thanks,
Dyuti

On Sun, Jun 3, 2018 at 3:58 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  On 05/16/2018 04:45 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
>  > Hello Everyone,
>  >
>  > I am trying to write a pitch for Fedora Women's Day 2018 for promoting
>  > the event and attracting more contributors to organize the event. It
>  > would be very helpful if you could go through and leave some feedbacks
>  > for me. Here is the link to what I tried writing
>  > -https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch
>  >
>
>  I wanted to follow up with this thread from some discussion from channel.
>
>  Some of us reviewed the existing draft so far and left some feedback in
>  the Etherpad. Dyuti is working through the feedback and will let us know
>  when it's ready for a final review. After this, we will work with her on
>  adding and scheduling it to the Community Blog.
>
>  Thanks for working on this, Dyuti! \o/
>
>  --
>  Cheers,
>  Justin W. Flory
>  jflory7(a)gmail.com
>
>
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[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Justin W. Flory]

On 06/10/2018 09:40 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
>  Hello everyone,
>  
>  Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the
>  next round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We are
>  yet to finalize the 'Important dates' section.
>  Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
>  <https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.
>   
To follow up from our meeting on Friday, this post should be ready to
publish this week. Is it ready to enter as a draft on the Community
Blog? If I can help with publishing, let me know.

-- 
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com

[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Dyuti reCursedd]

Hi,

I have added the dates as discussed in the meeting and edited it slightly
after taking suggestions from bee and ams. I think it will be great if you
could help me with publishing the final draft. Also everyone, please feel
free to review it if needed.


On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:08 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  On 06/10/2018 09:40 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
>  > Hello everyone,
>  >
>  > Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the
>  > next round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We are
>  > yet to finalize the 'Important dates' section.
>  > Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
>  > <https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.
>  >
>
>  To follow up from our meeting on Friday, this post should be ready to
>  publish this week. Is it ready to enter as a draft on the Community
>  Blog? If I can help with publishing, let me know.
>
>  --
>  Cheers,
>  Justin W. Flory
>  jflory7(a)gmail.com
>
>
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[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Amita Sharma]

Thanks for doing it. All look really good now, just one thing - Line 9 - We
welcome female and non-female ( can be replaces by "We welcome everyone ) ?

Regards,
Amita

On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM, Dyuti reCursedd <dona.grow(a)gmail.com&gt;
wrote:

>  Hi,
>
>  I have added the dates as discussed in the meeting and edited it slightly
>  after taking suggestions from bee and ams. I think it will be great if you
>  could help me with publishing the final draft. Also everyone, please feel
>  free to review it if needed.
>
>
>  On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:08 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt;
>  wrote:
>
> > On 06/10/2018 09:40 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
> > > Hello everyone,
> > >
> > > Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the
> > > next round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We are
> > > yet to finalize the 'Important dates' section.
> > > Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
> > > <https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.
> > >
> >
> > To follow up from our meeting on Friday, this post should be ready to
> > publish this week. Is it ready to enter as a draft on the Community
> > Blog? If I can help with publishing, let me know.
> >
> > --
> > Cheers,
> > Justin W. Flory
> > jflory7(a)gmail.com
> >
> >
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[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Dyuti reCursedd]

Hello Everyone!

We have the FWD community blog draft version ready. Please feel free to
drop in and review the draft.
https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/?p=5941&preview=1&_ppp=91...

Thanks,
Dyuti


On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:42 PM, Amita Sharma <amsharma(a)redhat.com&gt; wrote:

>  Thanks for doing it. All look really good now, just one thing - Line
> 9 - We
>  welcome female and non-female ( can be replaces by "We welcome everyone )
>  ?
>
>  Regards,
>  Amita
>
>  On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM, Dyuti reCursedd <dona.grow(a)gmail.com&gt;
>  wrote:
>
> > Hi,
> >
> > I have added the dates as discussed in the meeting and edited it slightly
> > after taking suggestions from bee and ams. I think it will be great if you
> > could help me with publishing the final draft. Also everyone, please feel
> > free to review it if needed.
> >
> >
> > On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:08 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt;
> > wrote:
> >
> >> On 06/10/2018 09:40 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
> >> > Hello everyone,
> >> >
> >> > Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the
> >> > next round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We
> >> are
> >> > yet to finalize the 'Important dates' section.
> >> > Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
> >> > <https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.
> >> >
> >>
> >> To follow up from our meeting on Friday, this post should be ready to
> >> publish this week. Is it ready to enter as a draft on the Community
> >> Blog? If I can help with publishing, let me know.
> >>
> >> --
> >> Cheers,
> >> Justin W. Flory
> >> jflory7(a)gmail.com
> >>
> >>
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[fedora-d&i] Re: Feedback for FWD pitch

[Amita Sharma]

yeah looks great. Thanks.

On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 9:29 PM, Dyuti reCursedd <dona.grow(a)gmail.com&gt;
wrote:

>  Hello Everyone!
>
>  We have the FWD community blog draft version ready. Please feel free to
>  drop in and review the draft.
>  https://communityblog.fedoraproject.org/?p=5941&preview=1&_ppp=91...
>
>  Thanks,
>  Dyuti
>
>
>  On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:42 PM, Amita Sharma <amsharma(a)redhat.com&gt;
>  wrote:
>
> > Thanks for doing it. All look really good now, just one thing - Line 9 - We
> > welcome female and non-female ( can be replaces by "We welcome everyone
> > ) ?
> >
> > Regards,
> > Amita
> >
> > On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM, Dyuti reCursedd <dona.grow(a)gmail.com&gt;
> > wrote:
> >
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> I have added the dates as discussed in the meeting and edited it
> >> slightly after taking suggestions from bee and ams. I think it will be
> >> great if you could help me with publishing the final draft. Also everyone,
> >> please feel free to review it if needed.
> >>
> >>
> >> On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 12:08 AM, Justin W. Flory <jflory7(a)gmail.com&gt;
> >> wrote:
> >>
> >>> On 06/10/2018 09:40 AM, Dyuti reCursedd wrote:
> >>> > Hello everyone,
> >>> >
> >>> > Thanks a lot for all the feedbacks so far. The FWD pitch is up for the
> >>> > next round of reviews. Please feel free to drop in any feedbacks. We
> >>> are
> >>> > yet to finalize the 'Important dates' section.
> >>> > Here is the link to the Etherpad: FWD pitch
> >>> > <https://etherpad.gnome.org/p/FWD_Marketing_pitch>;.
> >>> >
> >>>
> >>> To follow up from our meeting on Friday, this post should be ready to
> >>> publish this week. Is it ready to enter as a draft on the Community
> >>> Blog? If I can help with publishing, let me know.
> >>>
> >>> --
> >>> Cheers,
> >>> Justin W. Flory
> >>> jflory7(a)gmail.com
> >>>
> >>>
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