commit a36ff732a6c18f49442f0725d9353d365e07bda4 Author: Glen Rundblom grundblom@fedoraproject.org Date: Sun Nov 1 15:42:14 2015 -0600
Fixed The error of the URL pointing at the Fedora21 URL bug list, pointed it to the Fedora23 Bug list bug and grammer# 1276954. Also commited changes to master instead of f23, fixed the documents in the f23 branch as well
en-US/Feedback.xml | 2 +- en-US/Welcome.xml | 17 +++++++---------- 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) --- diff --git a/en-US/Feedback.xml b/en-US/Feedback.xml index 509d758..98bc736 100644 --- a/en-US/Feedback.xml +++ b/en-US/Feedback.xml @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Bugs And Feature Requests</ulink>. A list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this release is available from <ulink - url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Common_F21_bugs%22%3E + url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Common_F23_bugs%22%3E Common F&PRODVER; bugs</ulink>, on the wiki. </para> <para> diff --git a/en-US/Welcome.xml b/en-US/Welcome.xml index 3558588..869fc1f 100644 --- a/en-US/Welcome.xml +++ b/en-US/Welcome.xml @@ -63,22 +63,19 @@ <section> <title>Need Help?</title> <para> - There are a number of places you can get assistance should you - run into problems. + There are a number of places to get assistance if you encounter problems. </para> <para> - If you run into a problem and would like some assistance, go to - <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />. Many - answers are already there, but if you don't find yours, you can - simply post a new question. This has the advantage that anyone - else with the same problem can find the answer, too. + If you encounter a problem and would like some assistance, go to + <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />. Previous questions and answers are there. + If you cannot find your problem, simply post a new question. + This helps other people who may have the same issue as you. </para> <para> You may also find assistance on the <filename>#fedora</filename> channel on the IRC net <filename>irc.freenode.net</filename>. - Keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting - to help, but folks knowledgeable about a specific topic might not - always be available. + Please keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting + to help; people with specific knowledge and skills may not always be available. </para> </section> </section>