Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3123
Modified Files: ArchSpecific.xml DatabaseServers.xml Desktop.xml Extras.xml FileServers.xml Installer.xml Kernel.xml Networking.xml PackageNotes.xml Printing.xml Samba.xml Security.xml ServerTools.xml SystemDaemons.xml Virtualization.xml Welcome.xml Xorg.xml Log Message: Remove test notification for good measure. Our language needs to reflect more fully that beat writers now risk losing their section in the release notes if they do not update.
Index: ArchSpecific.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/ArchSpecific.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- ArchSpecific.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ ArchSpecific.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.7 @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - Fedora Core 6 test2 supports only the "New World" + Fedora Core 6 supports only the "New World" generation of Apple Power Macintosh, shipped from circa 1999 onward. </para> @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
<para> The disk space requirements listed below represent the disk - space taken up by Fedora Core 6 test2 after installation is + space taken up by Fedora Core 6 after installation is complete. However, additional disk space is required during installation to support the installation environment. This additional disk space corresponds to the size of @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ <title>PPC Installation Notes</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ <title>x86 Hardware Requirements</title>
<para> - In order to use specific features of Fedora Core 6 test2 during + In order to use specific features of Fedora Core 6 during or after installation, you may need to know details of other hardware components such as video and network cards. </para> @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ <title>Hard Disk Space Requirements</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ <title>x86_64 Hardware Requirements</title>
<para> - In order to use specific features of Fedora Core 6 test2 during + In order to use specific features of Fedora Core 6 during or after installation, you may need to know details of other hardware components such as video and network cards. </para> @@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
<para> The disk space requirements listed below represent the disk - space taken up by Fedora Core 6 test2 after the installation + space taken up by Fedora Core 6 after the installation is complete. However, additional disk space is required during the installation to support the installation environment. This additional disk space corresponds to the size of
Index: DatabaseServers.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/DatabaseServers.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- DatabaseServers.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ DatabaseServers.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.7 @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ </important>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Desktop.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Desktop.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- Desktop.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:29 -0000 1.4 +++ Desktop.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.5 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ <title>Desktop</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Extras.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Extras.xml,v retrieving revision 1.7 retrieving revision 1.8 diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8 --- Extras.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.7 +++ Extras.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.8 @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ <title>About Fedora Extras</title>
<para> - As of the release of Fedora Core 6 test2, there are approximately + As of the release of Fedora Core 6, there are approximately 2,000 packages in Fedora Extras, built from 1,350 source packages. The following list includes some popular and well-known applications that are maintained by community members in Fedora
Index: FileServers.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/FileServers.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- FileServers.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ FileServers.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.5 @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the <ulink + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. </para>
Index: Installer.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Installer.xml,v retrieving revision 1.7 retrieving revision 1.8 diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8 --- Installer.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.7 +++ Installer.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.8 @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ <para> This section outlines those issues that are related to <application>Anaconda</application> (the Fedora Core installation - program) and installing Fedora Core 6 test2 in general. + program) and installing Fedora Core 6 in general. </para>
<para> @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <title>Downloading Large Files</title>
<para> - If you intend to download the Fedora Core 6 test2 DVD ISO + If you intend to download the Fedora Core 6 DVD ISO image, keep in mind that not all file downloading tools can accommodate files larger than 2GB in size. <command>wget</command> 1.9.1-16 and above, @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ <itemizedlist> <listitem> <para> - Fedora Core 6 test2 supports graphical FTP and HTTP + Fedora Core 6 supports graphical FTP and HTTP installations. However, the installer image must either fit in RAM or appear on local storage such as Installation Disc 1. Therefore, only systems with more than 192MiB of RAM, or which
Index: Kernel.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Kernel.xml,v retrieving revision 1.9 retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10 --- Kernel.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:20:29 -0000 1.9 +++ Kernel.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.10 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<para> This section covers changes and important information regarding the - kernel in Fedora Core 6 test2. + kernel in Fedora Core 6. </para>
<section> @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ <title>Kernel Flavors</title>
<para> - Fedora Core 6 test2 includes the following kernel builds: + Fedora Core 6 includes the following kernel builds: </para>
<itemizedlist>
Index: Networking.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Networking.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- Networking.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ Networking.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:19 -0000 1.5 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ <title>Networking</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <title>User Tools</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ <title>Major Kernel Changes</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: PackageNotes.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/PackageNotes.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- PackageNotes.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ PackageNotes.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.5 @@ -7,13 +7,13 @@
<para> The following sections contain information regarding software - packages that have undergone significant changes for Fedora Core 6 - test2. For easier access, they are generally organized using the - same groups that are shown in the installation system. + packages that have undergone significant changes for Fedora Core 6. + For easier access, they are generally organized using the same + groups that are shown in the installation system. </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Printing.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Printing.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- Printing.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ Printing.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.5 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ <title>Printing</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Samba.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Samba.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- Samba.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ Samba.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.5 @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Security.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Security.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- Security.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ Security.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.7 @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <title>What's New</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ </itemizedlist>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: ServerTools.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/ServerTools.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- ServerTools.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ ServerTools.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.5 @@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
<para> This section highlights changes and additions to the various GUI - server and system configuration tools in Fedora Core 6 test2. + server and system configuration tools in Fedora Core 6. </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: SystemDaemons.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/SystemDaemons.xml,v retrieving revision 1.4 retrieving revision 1.5 diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 --- SystemDaemons.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:10:30 -0000 1.4 +++ SystemDaemons.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.5 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ <title>System Daemons</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>. @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <title>System Services</title>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Virtualization.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Virtualization.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- Virtualization.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ Virtualization.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.7 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<para> Virtualization in Fedora Core is based on Xen. Xen 3.0 is integrated - within Fedora Core 6 test2 in the installer. Refer to <ulink + within Fedora Core 6 in the installer. Refer to <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Tools/Xen'/> for more information about Xen. </para> @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ <para> There are several types of virtualization: full virtualization, paravirtualization, and single kernel image virtualization. Under - Fedora Core 6 test2 using Xen 3.0, paravirtualization is the most + Fedora Core 6 using Xen 3.0, paravirtualization is the most common type. With VM hardware, it is also possible to implement full virtualization. </para> @@ -83,17 +83,17 @@
<para> Xen must be installed on the host OS and the host OS must be - booted into the Hypervisor Kernel. Fedora Core 6 test2 includes an + booted into the Hypervisor Kernel. Fedora Core 6 includes an installation program for the guest OS that will use an existing installation tree of a paravirtualized-enabled OS to access that - OS's existing installation program. Currently, Fedora Core 6 test2 + OS's existing installation program. Currently, Fedora Core 6 is the only available paravirtualized-enabled guest OS. Other OSs can be installed using existing images, but not through the OS's native installation program. </para>
<para> - This section has not been completed for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been completed for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.
Index: Welcome.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Welcome.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- Welcome.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ Welcome.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.7 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ <para> These release notes may be updated. Visit <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/release-notes/"/> to view - the latest release notes for Fedora Core 6 test2. + the latest release notes for Fedora Core 6. </para> </tip> </listitem>
Index: Xorg.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Xorg.xml,v retrieving revision 1.6 retrieving revision 1.7 diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 --- Xorg.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6 +++ Xorg.xml 29 Aug 2006 00:32:20 -0000 1.7 @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ </para>
<para> - This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 test2 by the + This section has not been updated for Fedora Core 6 by the <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'>beat writer</ulink>.