install-guide/en entities.xml, 1.3, 1.4 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.13, 1.14

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17754/en

Modified Files:
    entities.xml fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 
Log Message:
- Updated text to match Rawhide - "Sound Card" screen has been removed.

Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- entities.xml	4 Mar 2006 23:56:10 -0000	1.3
+++ entities.xml	12 Mar 2006 18:16:50 -0000	1.4
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCVERSION">
       <comment>Document version</comment>
-      <text>1.24</text>
+      <text>1.25</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCDATE">
       <comment>Document date</comment>
-      <text>2006-03-04</text>
+      <text>2006-03-12</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCID">
       <comment>Document ID string</comment>

Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	6 Mar 2006 02:22:58 -0000	1.13
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	12 Mar 2006 18:16:50 -0000	1.14
@@ -518,9 +518,26 @@

<para>
       After you configure login services, select
-      <guilabel>Forward</guilabel> to proceed.
+      <guilabel>Finish</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen.
+      Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
     </para>
+
+    <important>
+      <title>Update Your System</title>
+
+      <para>
+        To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
+        after the installation completes.
+        <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
+        &FED; system.
+      </para>
+    </important>
+
+
   </section>
+
+<!-- SE: This screen is not enabled.
+
   <section id="sn-firstboot-soundcard">
     <title>Sound Card</title>

@@ -557,7 +574,6 @@
       check your speakers and try again. In some cases, you may need to
       alter the additional settings to obtain the best sound quality.
     </para>
-<!-- SE: Why would you disable "Dynamic keys for software mixer" ? -->
     <para>
       A sound card may provide multiple audio input and output devices.
       To change the <guilabel>Default PCM device</guilabel>, select a
@@ -582,22 +598,10 @@
         Detection</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
-    <para>
-      Click <guilabel>Forward</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen.
-      Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
-    </para>
-
-    <important>
-      <title>Update Your System</title>

-      <para>
-        To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
-        after the installation completes.
-        <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
-        &FED; system.
-      </para>
-    </important>
   </section>
+
+-->
 </chapter>

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