[release-notes] Fixed Wording in the Need Help section after looking at bug 1276954. Further fixed the grammer in th

[grundblom]

commit bbd63452b364ffbdb74778b8efbdee4ad0fbd8ae
Author: Glen Rundblom 
Date:   Sun Nov 1 15:20:04 2015 -0600

Fixed Wording in the Need Help section after looking at bug 1276954. Further fixed the grammer in the next paragraph about the IRC channel

en-US/Welcome.xml |   17 +++++++----------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Welcome.xml b/en-US/Welcome.xml
index 3558588..869fc1f 100644
--- a/en-US/Welcome.xml
+++ b/en-US/Welcome.xml
@@ -63,22 +63,19 @@
   <section>
     <title>Need Help?</title>
     <para>
-      There are a number of places you can get assistance should you
-      run into problems.
+      There are a number of places to get assistance if you encounter problems.
     </para>
     <para>
-      If you run into a problem and would like some assistance, go to
-      <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />.  Many
-      answers are already there, but if you don't find yours, you can
-      simply post a new question.  This has the advantage that anyone
-      else with the same problem can find the answer, too.
+      If you encounter a problem and would like some assistance, go to
+      <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />. Previous questions and answers are there. 
+      If you cannot find your problem, simply post a new question. 
+      This helps other people who may have the same issue as you.
     </para>
     <para>
       You may also find assistance on the <filename>#fedora</filename>
       channel on the IRC net <filename>irc.freenode.net</filename>.
-      Keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting
-      to help, but folks knowledgeable about a specific topic might not
-      always be available.
+      Please keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting
+      to help; people with specific knowledge and skills may not always be available.
     </para>
   </section>
 </section>