[release-notes/f23] Fixed The error of the URL pointing at the Fedora21 URL bug list, pointed it to the Fedora23 Bug lis

[grundblom]

commit a36ff732a6c18f49442f0725d9353d365e07bda4
Author: Glen Rundblom 
Date:   Sun Nov 1 15:42:14 2015 -0600

Fixed The error of the URL pointing at the Fedora21 URL bug list, pointed it to the Fedora23 Bug list bug and grammer# 1276954. Also commited changes to master instead of f23, fixed the documents in the f23 branch as well

en-US/Feedback.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Welcome.xml  |   17 +++++++----------
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Feedback.xml b/en-US/Feedback.xml
index 509d758..98bc736 100644
--- a/en-US/Feedback.xml
+++ b/en-US/Feedback.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
       Bugs And Feature Requests</ulink>.
       A list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this
       release is available from <ulink
-      url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Common_F21_bugs%22%3E
+      url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Common_F23_bugs%22%3E
       Common F&PRODVER; bugs</ulink>, on the wiki.
   </para>
   <para>
diff --git a/en-US/Welcome.xml b/en-US/Welcome.xml
index 3558588..869fc1f 100644
--- a/en-US/Welcome.xml
+++ b/en-US/Welcome.xml
@@ -63,22 +63,19 @@
   <section>
     <title>Need Help?</title>
     <para>
-      There are a number of places you can get assistance should you
-      run into problems.
+      There are a number of places to get assistance if you encounter problems.
     </para>
     <para>
-      If you run into a problem and would like some assistance, go to
-      <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />.  Many
-      answers are already there, but if you don't find yours, you can
-      simply post a new question.  This has the advantage that anyone
-      else with the same problem can find the answer, too.
+      If you encounter a problem and would like some assistance, go to
+      <ulink type="http" url="http://ask.fedoraproject.org" />. Previous questions and answers are there. 
+      If you cannot find your problem, simply post a new question. 
+      This helps other people who may have the same issue as you.
     </para>
     <para>
       You may also find assistance on the <filename>#fedora</filename>
       channel on the IRC net <filename>irc.freenode.net</filename>.
-      Keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting
-      to help, but folks knowledgeable about a specific topic might not
-      always be available.
+      Please keep in mind that the channel is populated by volunteers wanting
+      to help; people with specific knowledge and skills may not always be available.
     </para>
   </section>
 </section>