install-guide/en_US entities.xml, 1.2, 1.3 fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml, 1.1, 1.2

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24914/en_US

Modified Files:
	entities.xml fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 
Log Message:
- Reenbled Sound Card section, as final release includes this screen (note that this
requires a current screenshot).




Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- entities.xml	20 Mar 2006 13:34:10 -0000	1.2
+++ entities.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.3
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCVERSION">
       <comment>Document version</comment>
-      <text>1.26</text>
+      <text>1.27</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCDATE">
       <comment>Document date</comment>
-      <text>2006-03-14</text>
+      <text>2006-03-29</text>
     </entity>
     <entity name="DOCID">
       <comment>Document ID string</comment>


Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@
     </tip>
     <para>
       &FED; includes a graphical application to create and modify
-      Kickstart files by selecting the options you require. Use the
+      Kickstart files by selecting the options that you require. Use the
       package <filename>system-config-kickstart</filename> to install
       this utility. To load the &FED; Kickstart editor, choose
       <menuchoice> <guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
<guisubmenu>System
@@ -765,8 +765,7 @@
           include the extensions <filename>.zip</filename>, or
           <filename>.tar.gz</filename>. To extract the contents of a
           zipped file with a &FED; system, choose <menuchoice>
-          <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guisubmenu>System
-          Tools</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Archive
+          <guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
<guisubmenu>Accessories</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Archive
           Manager</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
         </para>
       </note>


Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@
       that are valid for your hardware.
     </para>
     <tip>
-      <title>Resetting the display</title>
+      <title>Resetting the Display</title>
       <para>
         To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
         choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
       secure password.
     </para>
     <tip>
-      <title>Creating extra user accounts</title>
+      <title>Creating Extra User Accounts</title>
       <para>
         To add additional user accounts to your system after the
         installation is complete, choose <menuchoice>
@@ -515,29 +515,7 @@
       user information, select <guibutton>Use Network
       Login...</guibutton>.
     </para>
-
-    <para>
-      After you configure login services, select
-      <guilabel>Finish</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen.
-      Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
-    </para>
-
-    <important>
-      <title>Update Your System</title>
-
-      <para>
-        To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
-        after the installation completes.
-        <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
-        &FED; system.
-      </para>
-    </important>
-
-
   </section>
-
-<!-- SE: This screen is not enabled.
-
   <section id="sn-firstboot-soundcard">
     <title>Sound Card</title>
 
@@ -574,6 +552,7 @@
       check your speakers and try again. In some cases, you may need to
       alter the additional settings to obtain the best sound quality.
     </para>
+
     <para>
       A sound card may provide multiple audio input and output devices.
       To change the <guilabel>Default PCM device</guilabel>, select a
@@ -598,10 +577,23 @@
         Detection</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
+    <para>
+      After you configure the sound card, select
+      <guilabel>Finish</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen. Your
+      &FC; system is now ready for use.
+    </para>
 
-  </section>
+    <important>
+      <title>Update Your System</title>
 
--->
+      <para>
+        To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
+        after the installation completes.
+        <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
+        &FED; system.
+      </para>
+    </important>
+  </section>
 </chapter>
 
 <!--


Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml	17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
@@ -37,15 +37,15 @@
     <para>
       To update your system with the latest packages, use the
       <indexterm>
-        <primary>Package Updater</primary>
+        <primary>Software Updater</primary>
       </indexterm>
-      <application>Package Updater</application>:
+      <application>Software Updater</application>:
     </para>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
-          <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Package
+          <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Software
           Updater</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-community">
-    <title>Joining The &FED; Community</title>
+    <title>Joining the &FED; Community</title>
 
     <para>
       The &FP; is driven by the individuals that contribute to it.


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000	1.2
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
     <title>Core Network Services</title>
 
     <para>
-      All Fedora Core installation include the following network services:
+      All Fedora Core installations include the following network services:
     </para>
 
     <itemizedlist>