install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml, 1.6, 1.7 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-locale.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml, 1.5, 1.6 fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml, 1.5, 1.6

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11525/en

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-locale.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 
Log Message:
- Fixed admonition title in Locale section.
- Added note that the second stage installer may take a while to download from network
servers (this file is now 67 Mb !).
- Added mDNS to the list of mandatory services installed with Core.
- Added admonition that opening the SSH port provides immediate remote access, since the
service is automatically live.
- Added admonition to explain "isa" boot option.




Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:13 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.6
@@ -1048,6 +1048,14 @@
           </tbody>
         </tgroup>
       </table>
+
+<note>
+<title>Additional Screen</title>
+<para>
+  The <option>isa</option> option causes the system to display an additional
text screen at the beginning of the installation process. Use this screen to configure the
ISA devices on your computer.
+</para>
+</note>
+
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-boot-modes">
@@ -1095,8 +1103,7 @@
         </indexterm>
         rescue disc or the first installation disc, without installing
         &FED; on the computer. This enables you to use the utilities and
-        functions of a running Linux system to modify or repair an
-        installed system.
+        functions of a running Linux system to modify or repair systems that are already
installed on your computer.
       </para>
 
       <para>


Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml	1 Mar 2006 12:52:56 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.7
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
       <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> facilities enable a group, or array,
       of drives to act as a single device. Configure any RAID functions
       provided by your mainboard, or attached controller cards, before
-      you install &FC;. Active RAID arrays appear as one drive.
+      you install &FC;. Each active RAID array appears as one drive.
     </para>
   </important>
 <!-- SE: Note that this chapter uses the term "Linux software RAID" to
differentiate RAID provided by the kernel from the functions of ATA RAID controllers,
which are often also called "software RAID". Unfortunately. -->
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
       customize the partition layout. If you choose to either
       <guilabel>Create custom layout</guilabel>, or <guilabel>Review
and
       modify partitioning layout</guilabel>, proceed to
-      <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/> .
+      <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/>.
     </para>
   </note>
   <section id="sn-partitioning-general">


Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.6
@@ -129,6 +129,13 @@
       check box next to the service name.
     </para>
 
+    <important>
+      <title>SSH Provides Immediate Remote Access</title>
+       <para>
+	 By default, &FED; installs and runs the SSH service. If you enable SSH access on
this screen the user and <systemitem
class="username">root</systemitem> accounts may be used to access the
system remotely.
+       </para>
+    </important>
+
     <para>
       To enable access to other services, enter the required ports in
       the <guilabel>Other ports:</guilabel> field. For each port, you


Index: fedora-install-guide-locale.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-locale.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-locale.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-locale.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.6
@@ -20,6 +20,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <important>
+   <title>Network Installations</title>
     <para>
       Network installations with HTTP and FTP always use text screens on
       systems with less than 128Mb of memory.


Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.6
@@ -156,6 +156,15 @@
           </textobject>
         </mediaobject>
       </figure>
+
+  <note>
+    <title>Large Download</title>
+
+    <para>
+      Network installations download the main installation program from the server that
you specify. The graphical installation program is over 60 Mb in size. Computers with a
slow network connection may take several minutes to download this file. 
+    </para>
+  </note>
+
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-installing-from-harddrive">


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	1 Mar 2006 01:43:14 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml	2 Mar 2006 01:24:58 -0000	1.6
@@ -117,6 +117,11 @@
           remote access through SSH (Secure SHell)
         </para>
       </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          resource advertising through mDNS (multicast DNS)
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>