Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13132
Modified Files:
OverView.xml
Log Message:
Capturing some worthwhile language changes at the last minute from Dave Jones.
Index: OverView.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- OverView.xml 28 Feb 2006 21:45:48 -0000 1.5
+++ OverView.xml 1 Mar 2006 00:33:21 -0000 1.6
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<para> The new <emphasis role='strong'>GNOME User
Share</emphasis> facility provides simple and efficient file sharing. </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para> Software suspend (hibernate) capability is now provided for a
wide variety of hardware. </para>
+ <para>Suspend to RAM support has also been improved due to
infrastructure work done by the hibernate support.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para> The previous graphical software management utilities have been
replaced with the first versions of a new generation of tools. This release includes
<emphasis role='strong'>Pup</emphasis>, a simple interface for system
updates, and <emphasis role='strong'>Pirut</emphasis>, a new package
manager that replaces <code>system-config-packages</code>. These build on the
<code>yum</code> utility, to provide consistent software installation and
update facilities throughout the system. </para>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
<para> A large number of <emphasis
role='strong'>GTK</emphasis> and <emphasis
role='strong'>GNOME</emphasis> programs take advantage of the
<emphasis role='strong'>Cairo</emphasis> 2D graphics library
(<ulink
url='http://cairographics.org/'>http://cairographics.org/</...>),
included in this release, to provide streamlined attractive graphical interfaces.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para> There are new drivers that provide support for the widely-used
Broadcom 43xx wireless chipsets (<ulink
url='http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/'>http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/</ulink>).
</para>
+ <para> There are new experimental drivers that provide support for the
widely-used Broadcom 43xx wireless chipsets (<ulink
url='http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/'>http://bcm43xx.berlios.de/</ulink>).
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para> This release includes <code>libnotify</code>, a
library that features simple and attractive notifications for the desktop. </para>