Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4 In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv5721
Modified Files: kernel.xml Log Message: Very minor changes - ispell is your friend
Index: kernel.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/kernel.xml,v retrieving revision 1.11 retrieving revision 1.12 diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12 --- kernel.xml 19 Jul 2005 04:24:07 -0000 1.11 +++ kernel.xml 19 Jul 2005 12:02:01 -0000 1.12 @@ -90,16 +90,17 @@ </section> <!-- <tip> - <title>Using <command>yum</command> to Uninstall Kernel + <title>Using <command>yum</command> to Remove Kernel Packages</title> <para> &FC; &LOCALVER; contains support for clustering systems using CMAN and GFS. These kernels require assistance from some user-space packages. - These packages are not removed when using <command>rpm -e</command> to uninstall older versions of the kernel packages. + These packages are not removed when using <command>rpm + -e</command> to remove older versions of the kernel packages. </para> <para> - When using <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable> </command> to uninstall the kernel, you must also remove the assisting user-space packages. You may wish to consider a dependecy resolving tool such as <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable> </command>. - This automatically removes any dependant packages. + When using <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable> </command> to remove the kernel, you must also remove the assisting user-space packages. You may wish to consider a dependency resolving tool such as <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable> </command>. + This automatically removes any dependent packages. </para> </tip> --> @@ -236,7 +237,7 @@ <para>to this:</para> <screen width="60">EXTRAVERSION = -1.234_FC4</screen> <para> - that is, substitude everything from the final dash onward. + that is, substitute everything from the final dash onward. </para> </step> <step> @@ -279,7 +280,7 @@ </para> </section> <section id="sn-kernel-coop"> - <title>Userspace Dependancies on the Kernel</title> + <title>User Space Dependencies on the Kernel</title> <para> &DISTRO; adds support for clustered systems. This requires a special kernel that works in conjunction with some user-space @@ -287,14 +288,14 @@ such a kernel, perhaps after an update, you <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> simply use the <command>rpm -e kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable></command> - command as in earlier distributions because these userspace + command as in earlier distributions because these user space packages depend on the kernel package. You may either list both - the kernel package and its userspace dependant packages on the + the kernel package and its user space dependent packages on the <command>rpm -e</command> command, or you may wish to use the <command>yum remove kernel-<replaceable><version></replaceable></command> command instead since <command>yum</command> automatically removes - dependant packages if necesssary. + dependent packages if necessary. </para> </section> </section>
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