commit 2853e652d8c0963030723afe35c9659947311b8e
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 16:01:30 2012 +1000
Intro para and minor edits to Installation Source section
en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml | 45 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
1 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
index 5e58536..620efc9 100644
--- a/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installation_Source-x86.xml
@@ -5,7 +5,11 @@
]>
<section id="installation-source-x86">
<title>Installation Source</title>
- <para>
+ <para>
+ Select <guilabel>Installation Source</guilabel> from the Installation
Hub.
+ </para>
+
+ <para>
Specify the location you would like to install Fedora from. Choose between an ISO file
or a network location.
</para>
@@ -20,8 +24,41 @@
</para>
<para>
- To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu:
<guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, <guilabel>http://</guilabel>,
<guilabel>https://</guilabel>, <guilabel>ftp://</guilabel>, and
<guilabel>nfs</guilabel>.
- </para>
+ To specify a network location, choose from the following options in the drop-down menu:
+ </para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>http://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>https://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>ftp://</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ <guilabel>nfs</guilabel>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
+
<para>
Using your selection as the start of the location URL, type the rest into the address
box. (If you selected <guilabel>Closest mirror</guilabel>, an address is not
required.)
@@ -44,7 +81,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- Once you have selected your installation source, click
<guibutton>Back</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
+ Once you have selected your installation source, click
<guibutton>Done</guibutton> to return to the Installation Hub.
</para>
<!-- <figure float="0">
Show replies by date