Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/yum-software-management In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv16729/yum-software-management
Modified Files: yum-software-management-en.xml Log Message: Some style edits, still working on this...
Index: yum-software-management-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/yum-software-management/yum-software-management-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.18 retrieving revision 1.19 diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19 --- yum-software-management-en.xml 20 Jul 2005 00:55:56 -0000 1.18 +++ yum-software-management-en.xml 21 Jul 2005 16:54:45 -0000 1.19 @@ -124,59 +124,73 @@ <section id="sn-yum-additional-resources"> <title>Additional Resources</title> <indexterm> - <primary>yum, documentation</primary> + <primary>yum</primary> + <secondary>documentation</secondary> </indexterm> <indexterm> - <primary>yum, man pages</primary> + <primary>yum</primary> + <secondary>man pages</secondary> </indexterm> <para> - The <command>yum</command> utility has features and options that - are not discussed in this document. Read the - <command>man</command> pages for <command>yum(8)</command> and + The <command>yum</command> utility has features and options not + discussed in this document. Read the <command>man</command> + pages for <command>yum(8)</command> and <filename>yum.conf(5)</filename> to learn more, using the following commands: </para> <screen> -<userinput> -man yum man yum.conf +<userinput>man yum +man yum.conf </userinput> </screen> <indexterm> - <primary>yum, Websites</primary> + <primary>yum</primary> + <secondary>web sites</secondary> </indexterm> <indexterm> - <primary>yum, mailing lists</primary> + <primary>yum</primary> + <secondary>mailing lists</secondary> </indexterm> +<!-- Hopefully this is not too confusing below. This is sort of a --> +<!-- grammar/usage issue. If you use a variablelist, you don't want to --> +<!-- use sentences, but rather headings, in the term area. Alternately, --> +<!-- if you like sentences, just use a para instead for the whole --> +<!-- collection of links. [PWF] --> + <para> + Other useful <command>yum</command> resources on the Internet + include: + </para> + <variablelist> <varlistentry> <term> - The Website for <command>yum</command> is: + Web home page </term> <listitem> <para> - <ulink url="http://linux.duke.edu/projects/yum/">http://linux.duke.edu/projects/yum/</ulink> + <ulink url="http://linux.duke.edu/projects/yum/"/> </para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
<varlistentry> <term> - The mailing list for <command>yum</command> users is: - </term> + Users mailing list + </term> <listitem> <para> - <ulink url="https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/mailman/listinfo/yum/">https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/mailman/listinfo/yum/</ulink> + <ulink url="https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/mailman/listinfo/yum/"/> </para> </listitem> </varlistentry>
<varlistentry> <term> -The archive for the <command>yum</command> development mailing list is: -</term> + Development mailing list + </term> <listitem> <para> - <ulink url="https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/pipermail/yum-devel/">https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/pipermail/yum-devel/</ulink> + <ulink url="https://lists.dulug.duke.edu/pipermail/yum-devel/"/> </para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -190,7 +204,8 @@ <section id="sn-about-packages"> <title>About Packages</title> <indexterm> - <primary>packages, defined</primary> + <primary>packages</primary> + <secondary>defined</secondary> </indexterm> <para> All of the software and documentation prepared for use with @@ -206,12 +221,12 @@
<para> Packages also include a digital signature to prove their source. - This digital signature is verified by software management - utilities by using a GPG <firstterm>public key</firstterm>. The - <command>yum</command> and <command>rpm</command> utilities - share a common <firstterm>keyring</firstterm> that stores all of - the public keys for the package sources approved by the system - administrator. + Software management utilities verify this digital signature by + using a GPG <firstterm>public key</firstterm>. The + <command>yum</command> and <command>rpm</command> utilities + share a common <firstterm>keyring</firstterm> that stores all of + the public keys for approved package sources. The system + administrator configures these approved package sources. </para> </section>
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