commit 7191acc20e6d4542d082d8f997828d0bef8c76b4
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Dec 12 15:57:35 2012 +1000
Minor edits, corrections, and updates to partitioning sections
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml | 9 +++++++++
.../Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml | 2 +-
en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml | 2 +-
8 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
index 1cca27d..2f1ef07 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-list-1.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel>
+ <guilabel>BTRFS</guilabel> (B-Tree File System, as described in <xref
linkend="s3-diskpartitioning-file-x86" />
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
index 708e849..3b711bb 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-2.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Choose the hard drive you want to install Fedora on by clicking its image from the
graphical pane at the top of the screen. Each drive is marked with its label and size.
+ Choose the disks to install Fedora on by clicking their graphical representations from
the pane at the top of the screen. Each drive is marked with its label and size.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
index 76db076..b388bc6 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-7.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To partition the drive manually, select <guilabel>Let me customize the
partitioning of the disks instead</guilabel>.
+ To partition the drive manually, check the box labeled <guilabel>Let me
customize the partitioning of the disks instead</guilabel>.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
index a6727ce..55536a6 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-8.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed. If you chose to partition
the hard drive manually, you will be directed to <guilabel>Manual
Partitioning</guilabel>, which is addressed in <xref
linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />. If you chose automatic partitioning,
you will be returned to the Installation Hub.
+ Click <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed. If you chose to encrypt
the partitions, you will now be prompted to create a passphrase (refer to <xref
linkend="encrypt-x86" />. If you chose to partition the disks manually, you
will be directed to <guilabel>Manual Partitioning</guilabel>, which is
addressed in <xref linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />. If you chose
automatic partitioning, you will be returned to the Installation Hub.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..e7fe24b
--- /dev/null
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_common-para-9.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,9 @@
+<?xml version='1.0' encoding='utf-8' ?>
+<!DOCTYPE para PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!ENTITY % BOOK_ENTITIES SYSTEM "Installation_Guide.ent">
+%BOOK_ENTITIES;
+]>
+<para>
+ To change which drive will serve as the boot device or to decline installation of a
bootloader, click <guilabel>Full disk summary and options</guilabel> (refer to
<xref linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" />).
+</para>
+
diff --git a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
index 699389d..0afe942 100644
--- a/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Automatic_Partitioning_x86_ppc-tip-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- If you have chosen to automatically partition your system, you should select
<guilabel>Review</guilabel> and manually edit your
<filename>/boot/</filename> partition.
+ If you have chosen to automatically partition your system, you should manually edit your
<filename>/boot/</filename> partition (refer to <xref
linkend="s1-diskpartitioning-x86" />.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
index 5de1109..e188f9f 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup-x86.xml
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
<!-- If you have chosen to automatically partition your system ... -->
</important>
<para>
- Select <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> from the Installation
Hub to choose which hard drive to install Fedora on and to partition the drive.
+ Select <guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> from the Installation
Hub to select and partition the disks Fedora will be installed on.
</para>
<para>
Partitioning allows you to divide your hard drive into isolated sections, where each
section behaves as its own hard drive. Partitioning is particularly useful if you run
multiple operating systems. If you are not sure how you want your system to be
partitioned, read <xref linkend="ch-partitions-x86" /> for more
information.
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
index 276bcfa..e641e1f 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Setup_common-important-1.xml
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- To configure the Fedora boot loader to <firstterm>chain load</firstterm>
from a different boot loader, you must specify the boot drive manually. If you chose any
of the automatic partitioning options, you must now select the <guilabel>Review and
modify partitioning layout</guilabel> option before you click
<guibutton>Next</guibutton> or you cannot specify the correct boot drive.
+ To configure the Fedora boot loader to <firstterm>chain load</firstterm>
from a different boot loader, you must specify the boot drive manually by selecting
<guilabel>Full disk summary and options</guilabel> from the
<guilabel>Installation Destination</guilabel> screen. Refer to <xref
linkend="s1-x86-bootloader" /> for instructions on specifying a boot drive.
</para>
</important>
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