commit 85ebbf7ddd7669ab98d8646eb7e0bc06d37930c9
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Oct 8 13:22:10 2015 -0500
grammar adjustment to storage spoke, rhbz#1269294
en-US/StorageSpoke.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml b/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
index 360edae..60e3a84 100644
--- a/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
+++ b/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
In the top part of the screen, all locally available storage devices (SATA, IDE and
SCSI hard drives, USB flash drives, etc.) are displayed in the <guilabel>Local
Standard Disks</guilabel> section. Local disks are detected when the installer
starts - any storage devices connected after the installation has started will not be
shown.
</para>
<para>
- If you need to additional local storage devices, select <guilabel>I will
configure partitioning</guilabel> and press <guilabel>Done</guilabel> to
move to <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning" />.
Then, connect any new hard drives you want to make available during the installation, and
press the button marked by a circular arrow in the set of controls below the list of mount
points on the left side of the screen. In the dialog window that opens, press
<guilabel>Rescan Disks</guilabel> and wait until the scanning process
completes. Then, press <guilabel>OK</guilabel> to return to <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-storage-partitioning" />; all detected disks
including any new ones will be displayed in the <guilabel>Local Standard
Disks</guilabel> section.
+ If you need to configure additional local storage devices, select <guilabel>I
will configure partitioning</guilabel> and press
<guilabel>Done</guilabel> to move to <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning" />. Then, connect any new
hard drives you want to make available during the installation, and press the button
marked by a circular arrow in the set of controls below the list of mount points on the
left side of the screen. In the dialog window that opens, press <guilabel>Rescan
Disks</guilabel> and wait until the scanning process completes. Then, press
<guilabel>OK</guilabel> to return to <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-storage-partitioning" />; all detected disks
including any new ones will be displayed in the <guilabel>Local Standard
Disks</guilabel> section.
</para>
<para>
The <guilabel>Specialized & Network Disks</guilabel> section below
shows advanced network storage (such as iSCSI and FCoE disks) currently configured. When
you first open this screen, no such devices will be displayed because they can not be
automatically detected; to search for network storage devices <guilabel>Add a
disk</guilabel> button and proceed with <xref
linkend="sect-installation-gui-installation-destination" />. Any network
storage you configure will then show up in the <guilabel>Specialized &
Network Disks</guilabel> the same way local disks are shown above.
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