[Bug 1222303] New: Release notes on the TC4 beta iso differs from the website release notes

[Red Hat Bugzilla]

https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1222303

Bug ID: 1222303
           Summary: Release notes on the TC4 beta iso differs from the
                    website release notes
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: release-notes
          Severity: medium
          Assignee: [e-mail]
          Reporter: [e-mail]
        QA Contact: [e-mail]
                CC: [e-mail], [e-mail],
                    [e-mail]

Created attachment 1026450
  --> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=1026450&action=edit
Release Notes Edit example --  grade 5 versus high-school english

Description of problem:

The embedded release notes /usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes
differs from the release notes posted on the website

In addition the /usr/share/release notes refers to Fedora 19 in some links.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):

Fedora 22 Beta TC4 due to be released 26 May

How reproducible:

Steps to Reproduce:
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Actual results:

Expected results:

Good grammar and good release notes.  The release notes should be on the wiki,
where many eyes can see and improve them.

Additional info:

Justification for wiki

Refer to attached two example of documentation (before editing and after
editing)

[Bug 1222303] Release notes on the TC4 beta iso differs from the website release notes

[Red Hat Bugzilla]

https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1222303

Pete Travis  changed:

What    |Removed                     |Added
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             Status|NEW                         |CLOSED
                 CC|                            |[e-mail]
         Resolution|---                         |CURRENTRELEASE
        Last Closed|                            |2015-05-18 10:55:17

--- Comment #1 from Pete Travis  ---
Your summary is different from your description and the attachment is different
too.  The release notes are on the wiki during initial development and the copy
changes have already been discussed, so that leaves the packaged relnotes: an
updated package has been submitted.