[Bug 1193135] New: Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1

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Bug ID: 1193135
           Summary: Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1
           Product: Fedora Documentation
           Version: devel
         Component: multiboot-guide
          Severity: low
          Assignee: [e-mail]
          Reporter: [e-mail]
        QA Contact: [e-mail]
                CC: [e-mail]

Created attachment 992259
  --> https://bugzilla.redhat.com/attachment.cgi?id=992259&action=edit
smccann comments to multiboot guide.

Attaching a pdf with a few comments from the perspective of a newbie to both
Fedora and multiboot.  In general, very readable and understandable guide!

[Bug 1193135] Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1193135

Pete Travis  changed:

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             Status|NEW                         |ASSIGNED
                 CC|                            |[e-mail]
           Assignee|[e-mail]  |[e-mail]

--- Comment #1 from Pete Travis  ---
Thanks for the review, Sandra.  You've made some good suggestions that I will
incorporate soon.

[Bug 1193135] Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1

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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1193135

Pete Travis  changed:

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             Status|ASSIGNED                    |CLOSED
         Resolution|---                         |NEXTRELEASE
        Last Closed|                            |2015-11-02 23:07:18

--- Comment #2 from Pete Travis  ---
After a prolonged delay, I've incorporated many of your suggestions into the
guide.  Thanks again for the review!