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From: Jérôme Fenal <jfenal@gmail.com>
To: immanetize@fedoraproject.org; For participants of the Documentation Project <docs@lists.fedoraproject.org>
Sent: Tuesday, May 14, 2013 5:15 PM
Subject: Re: Release Notes available for Review

2013/5/14 Pete Travis <me@petetravis.com>:
> The work on the Release Notes so far has been posted to
> http://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/ for review. If you
> have a chance, please look it over for technical errors and grammatical
> flops.

Hi,

Spotted typos during translation to French:

In database_servers:
- Apache <package>Derby</package>, an open source relational database
**impelmented** entirely
--> implemented

- If required, the original MySQL packages are still available as
<filename>community-mysql</filename>.
--> should the tag be <filename> or <package>?

Multimedia:
To comply with XDG Base ***Direcotry*** specifications...

Productivity:
<function>xargs</function>, <function>printf</function> and regex functions.
--> <function>xargs</function>, <function>printf</function> and
<function>regex</function> functions.

sed... to separate lines by **ACII** NULL characters
--> ASCII NUL (both terms to modify)?


Virtualization:
Changes with <productname>OpenShift Grizzly</productname>
--> Should be Openstack...
Ceilomeer
--> Ceilometer

Snapshots can done to block devices as well as
--> can *be* done

That a first review of what is currently being translated in French
for the release notes. Expect more to come.

Regards,

J.
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