Hi Bex
I would have asked the author to rephrase the following
From
Once the RPM build finishes, a responsible team member then needs to connect to the build server via SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:
To
Once the RPM build completes, a responsible team member connects to the build server via SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:
or
After the RPM build successfully completes, a responsible team member uses SSH to connect to the build server in order to sign the completed RPM package using:
As I mentioned several times, I am able to write and to edit. But I find my schedule not compatible with "chat". I would do my markups and either make changes to a copy or send my changed to the author(s).
My tools for editing: I use LibreOffice Writer, wps or MS writer, as each contains "change flagging" and ability to add comments to the document.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
From: Brian (bex) Exelbierd <bexelbie@redhat.com>
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Subject: Re: Contributing docs for maintaining and creating a Fedora remix