On Thu, 2004-11-18 at 16:54, David Malcolm wrote:
On Thu, 2004-11-18 at 16:26 -0800, Karsten Wade wrote:
> cd
/home/kwade/Documents/projects/fedora/fedora-docs/selinux-apache/
> nsgmls -wxml -s /home/kwade/lib/psgmlx-0.5/lib/xml.dcl
> selinux-apache-en.xml
> nsgmls:/home/kwade/lib/psgmlx-0.5/lib/xml.dcl:1:W: SGML declaration was
> not implied
>
> SGML validation finished at Thu Nov 18 16:24:42
>
> FWIW, that's the way it normally appears when I validate (in Emacs using
> C-c C-v).
OK, great; good idea. Is xmllint happy with such a setup? If so, then
the ABOUT-DOC-EN probably _should_ get added to the main entities file.
As far as I can tell, it works fine. I just ran xmllint against it
(without options), with only FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN and the various
PUBLISHED-HTML-URL etc. defined in a document, and it validates, builds,
and does not error.
> > > > Any thoughts/rewrites? Perhaps the heading
should read "About This
> > > > Document" instead?
> > >
> > > Yes, that is more of an accurate title. Changed that in the attachment.
> >
> > Perhaps the file should have a different name; perhaps
> > "about-this-document-en.xml" ?
>
> How about about-doc-en.xml?
Yes, that's much better.
Maybe even "about-fedora-doc-en.xml", to make it clear that this relates
to a Fedora doc? (as opposed to RHEL)
No need, everything is separate ... although it is not improper, and is
certainly future proofing. Do as you wish, since I'm wishy-washy. :)
Can I go ahead and commit this (assuming I have access rights)? Or
should someone else on the list comment first? I'm just a lowly desktop
developer :-)
Nah, youse a riter, now.
I suggest you file a bug (RFE) against fedora-docs (tfox will get it,
she has write perms and the buck-stops-here for stuff like what goes in
fedora-docs/common), attach a patch to fedora-entities-en.xml, attach
the about{-fedora}-doc-en.xml file. We'll also need to fix the
fedora-docs/example-tutorial to include the new entity call(s) and
sample definitions for the 4 entities required by
- Karsten
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