Hi Bex
I would have asked the author to rephrase the following
From
Once the RPM build finishes, a responsible team member then needs to connect to the build
server via SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:To
Once the RPM build completes, a responsible team member connects to the build server via
SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:
or
After the RPM build successfully completes, a responsible team member uses SSH to connect
to the build server in order to sign the completed RPM package using:
As I mentioned several times, I am able to write and to edit. But I find my schedule not
compatible with "chat". I would do my markups and either make changes to a copy
or send my changed to the author(s).
My tools for editing: I use LibreOffice Writer, wps or MS writer, as each contains
"change flagging" and ability to add comments to the document.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
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Subject: Re: Contributing docs for maintaining and creating a Fedora remix
+devel list to attract feedback from other folks in releng or working on other remixes and
spins
On Mon, Apr 23, 2018 at 7:04 PM, Aidan Kahrs <abkahrs(a)gmail.com> wrote:
Hello.
I know this thread has been kinda quiet the last few days. I wanted to put out an update
that the draft documentation is finished. I have gotten input from my team. I would now
like input from people within the docs effort before I say it is ready to publish.
The draft docs can be found at
https://pagure.io/fedora-docs/
remix-building/blob/master/f/r emix-ci.adoc
One comment:
14: Why is this server required to be a CentOS server? I have no problem with CentOS but
we should explain that choice in the context of a Fedora Remix. The rest reads fine. I
hope other releng/remix/spin folks will comment on the technical details.
regards,
bex
DocGist was misbehaving so I was unable to get a rendered preview.
Please let me know what you think.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Aidan Kahrs
abkahrs(a)fedoraproject.org
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