On Dec 31, 2007 4:08 AM, Rahul Sundaram <sundaram(a)fedoraproject.org> wrote:
Timothy Murphy wrote:
> Rahul Sundaram wrote:
>> Finally did a quick rewrite of the overview page that I have been
>> wanting to do for a while now. Appreciate a review and additional content.
> I found it interesting and informative.
> But I didn't understand the section on Upstream Focus,
> "Fedora Project has a strong focus
> on not deviating from upstream as much as possible
> in all the different software it includes in the repository",
> until I read the link provided, when it became clear.
> But if the document is intended for non-gurus,
> it might be worth re-wording this bit.
> Something like, "Fedora tries to follow the development of packages
> as closely as possible, only adding its own patches
> where this is essential."
I copied what you did and performed a fairly large rewrite - the
result of being an obsessive-compulsive word-hacker.
It's at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JohnBabich/Overview
Use whatever you like.
Hacker of the Written Word