Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate
them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com> wrote:
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez
<ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
wrote:
>
> Hi there.
>
> Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
review.
>
>
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1...
>
> Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is
> not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too
long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it
might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you
consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like
this:
* What is FC and how do you install it?
* Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
--
Paul