Hi all,
I have done some editing to Ashutosh's article.
Would you mind giving it a final look before we publish it (Schedule for
next week).
In particular I am not quite sure this statement is correct "Red Hat is
supporting Buildah’s use in CentOS, Fedora, Debian, and RHEL
distributions." but I could be wrong.
This is the preview link
(Not to be
shared on Twitter Dan :D)
Thanks
Clément
On 18 April 2018 at 20:49, Ashutosh Bhakare <unnatisales123(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
Hi Paul,
I have edited the article once again considering all the inputs
suggested.
Please let me know if i need to fine tune it once again.
Thanks a lot !!!
Ashutosh
On Wed, 2018-04-18 at 09:11 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> Hi Ashutosh & co.,
>
> We'd like to schedule the buildah article to publish but there are a
> few rough edges that need help:
>
> * The first section doesn't give enough introduction to buildah. The
> only thing a reader knows is they're not using a daemon. Why
> should
> they care about that? Feel free to get help from Tom or William to
> add some introduction. It doesn't need to be more than a short
> paragraph or two. But readers should understand why the Magazine
> is
> suggesting they use this utility.
>
> * The second section with the httpd use case works pretty well, but
> it's a good idea to start the section by introducing the example.
>
> * Don't use "we," "us," "I," or "me" in
articles. The Magazine
> doesn't speak using the first person. You often don't even need to
> use "you," although that's fine if it makes text clearer.
>
> Paul
>
> On Tue, Apr 17, 2018 at 02:02:47PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote:
> > Hello Tom,
> > Its up and runnig, I guess you need fedoramagazine login details
> > for
> > this
> >
> > Regards
> > Ashutosh
> > On Mon, 2018-04-16 at 10:39 -0400, Tom Sweeney wrote:
> > > Hi Ashutosh,
> > >
> > > I tried pulling up the page via the link below, but it's
> > > returning a
> > > 404
> > > error. Has it moved?
> > >
> > > t
> > >
> > > On 04/15/2018 02:09 PM, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote:
> > > > Hi Paul,
> > > >
> > > > Thanks for approving !! Its was great help by refering Tom's
> > > > and
> > > > William blogs. Cheers :)
> > > >
> > > > I have drafted the article as below, please have a look and do
> > > > suggest
> > > > if any changes or editing required.
> > > >
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=20945&preview=true&preview_id=209
> > > > 45
> > > >
> > > > I could see that builah, podman, skopeo are very vast tools, i
> > > > have
> > > > wrrtten the draft considering "intermediate" level of
audience
> > > > on
> > > > buildah. If given a chance i would love to write a next level
> > > > article
> > > > on buildah which may cover a topic like "creating a image from
> > > > scratch"
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