Hi Justice,
I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me know if you notice anything else.
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On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo justice@del-castillo.net wrote:
Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9 to 8 as well.
Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If there is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of Installation's tenth bullet point, that would be great.
Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only covers hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated as well.
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