Re: need to make an edit on NVIDIA article

[Link Dupont]

Hi James,

Thank you for your feedback, however, we generally don't make edits to 
published articles except to correct inaccuracies. If you would like to 
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On Sat, Jul 7, 2018 at 1:13 PM, James Thornber 
 wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Reads well, I think! :) I've made a few suggestions below, feel free 
> to use
> if you think that they add to the article :)
>
> Perhaps change this:
> If you don't know it, open a Terminal (Applications > System Tools >
> Terminal) and type:
>
> To this:
> If you don't know how to do it, open a.....
>
> Consider changing this:
> This driver is suitable for any GPU found in 2010 and later.
>
> To:
> This driver is suitable for any GPU made since 2010 and later.
>
> Perhaps from (3 times in the article):
> Please remember to wait until the kmod get built earch time a new 
> kernel
> rise up.
>
> To:
> Please remember to wait whilst the kmod gets rebuilt each time the
> workstation or server is rebooted.
>
> Hmm... Is it worth moving the secure boot section more towards the 
> top of
> the article? It's a fairly big Show-Stopper - it's only a thought, as 
> I'd
> hate for people to try to install the nvidia drivers to find 
> themselves
> with a secure boot install! XD
>
> Best,
>
> James
>
> On Sat, 7 Jul 2018, 20:30 Link Dupont,  wrote:
> > Hi Justice,
> >
> > I have made these changes to the article. Take a look at let me 
> > know if
> >  you notice anything else.
> >
> > Link
> >
> > On Fri, Jul 6, 2018 at 9:44 AM, justice del castillo
> >   wrote:
> > > Yep! And, I forgot to mention, we should probably change bullet 9
> >
> > to
> > > 8 as well.
> > >
> > > Also, if we could remove the ", with the fans facing down. If
> >
> > there
> > > is no space for the fans to ventilate in this position, place the
> > > graphics card face up instead, if possible." part of
> >
> > Installation's
> > > tenth bullet point, that would be great.
> > >
> > > Finally, if we could add a note saying "NOTE: this guide only
> >
> > covers
> > > hardware installation for desktop computers, although the NVIDIA
> > > driver installation will be relevant for laptops as well." at the
> > > bottom of the preparation section, that would be much appreciated
> >
> > as
> > > well.
> > >
> > > Thank you!
> > > jdc
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