From: "Sumantro Mukherjee" <sumukher(a)redhat.com>
To: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com>
Cc: "Fedora Magazine mailing list" <magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org>
Sent: Friday, April 28, 2017 3:14:56 PM
Subject: [magazine] Re: [Request to Review] Automating lights with PIR motion sensor ,
Arduino with Fedora
----- Original Message -----
> From: "Paul W. Frields" <stickster(a)gmail.com>
> To: "Sumantro Mukherjee" <sumukher(a)redhat.com>
> Cc: "Fedora Magazine mailing list"
<magazine(a)lists.fedoraproject.org>
> Sent: Friday, April 28, 2017 3:12:08 AM
> Subject: [magazine] Re: [Request to Review] Automating lights with PIR
> motion sensor , Arduino with Fedora
>
> On Mon, Apr 24, 2017 at 08:07:33AM -0400, Sumantro Mukherjee wrote:
> > Hey All,
> >
> > I have drafted a small article on how to automate lights with PIR sensor
> > and Arduino with Fedora
> >
> >
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=17213&action=edit
> >
> > Can someone review?
>
> Sumantro, please review the workflow:
>
https://fedoramagazine.org/writing-an-article-for-the-fedora-magazine/
>
> We discussed this article in the Magazine editorial meeting tonight
> and love the idea. However, we feel it could benefit from more work.
>
> (1) screenshot should be from the OS and not a camera
> (2) process is a bit scarce, could maybe use more explanation and
> detail
>
> Are you still inclined to work on this article?
>
yes, I have worked a bit more and added some more clarity to the process. Can
you please have a look ?
Thanks
Sumantro
Paul, did you get the time to review this one?
Thanks
//sumantro
Fedora QA