I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic
issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited
to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
I need permission to access your document though.
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can
them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com>
> > Hi there.
> > Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
> > Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English
> > not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
> Hi Oliver,
> There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too
> long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it
> might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you
> consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like
> * What is FC and how do you install it?
> * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
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