Senor Gutierrez:
I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
I need permission to access your document though.
Dale
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields stickster@gmail.com wrote:
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_
Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English
is
not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this:
- What is FC and how do you install it?
- Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
-- Paul
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