Silvia,
There seem to be two places where Firefox is "first" (default and
shipped) in the evolution section.
The Matthew Miller sections seems a bit repetitious. Perhaps shorten it
to include the key quotes that add to the prior sections rather than
repeating them.
Have a Great Day!
Pat (tablepc)
On 1/27/20 10:14 AM, Silvia Sánchez wrote:
> Hello all,
>
> Sorry for being so late with this article, too many things in the way. Now
> about the changes you suggested, Matthew... I added them all except the
> bit about code names because that's something I'm planning to explain in
> detail when I get to that part of Fedora's history. This article should be
> the beginning/introduction to Fedora with a focus on the early years. Or
> that's how I planned it.
> Please, review the article and let me know if there's anything else that
> needs change. Also, I'd like to know who will take care of the banner
> image.
>
>
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=29794&preview=1&_ppp=51d8922c6d
>
> Kind regards,
> Silvia
> FAS: Lailah
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> On Tue, 14 Jan 2020 at 19:46, Matthew Miller <mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org>
> wrote:
>
>> On Tue, Jan 07, 2020 at 09:19:47AM +0300, Silvia Sánchez wrote:
>>> It's me again, sorry for the delay. I added images and checked the text
>>> again, please review it.
>>
>> Some comments:
>>
>> The lacrosse hat story is the official one -- I think that should go first.
>> I don't think the "red hat hacker" association was intended. (In
fact, I'm
>> not even sure that that *was* a term in the 1990s, although "black hat"
and
>> "white hat" certainly were.)
>>
>> On "timeline core and extras", I would like to be careful with the
>> distinction between "Red Hat" and "community" and the story
around that.
>> I know you quote me explaining it below :) but it's a big deal so I'd
like
>> the introduction to be right too.
>>
>> Further down... it might be nice to explain that we dropped the codenames
>> because it became increasingly difficult to find names that fit our process
>> and could be approved by legal. Not because we hate fun. :)
>>
>> --
>> Matthew Miller
>> <mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org>
>> Fedora Project Leader
>>
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