On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez(a)redhat.com> wrote:
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for review.
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is
not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome.
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too
long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it
might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you
consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like
* What is FC and how do you install it?
* Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile