El jue, 04-06-2020 a las 11:34 -0400, Ben Cotton escribió:
Hi Héctor, I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly significantedits, so please review it and let me know what you think. A shortsummary:
- Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links* Removed
use of first person* Removed the outline at the beginning* Put the installation instructions before the usage instructions* Removed the explanation of MIME types because it distracts from thepurpose of this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalonearticle at some point)* Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone" option to keepthe instructions simple* Voice changes like "Pressing the Insert key will add" -> "Press theInsert key to add"* Simplified the headers* General style edits to conform with https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount. Itwould benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in reallife. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you thinkyou'd be able to add that?