El jue, 04-06-2020 a las 11:34 -0400, Ben Cotton escribió:
I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly
significantedits, so please review it and let me know what you think.
* Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links* Removed
use of first person* Removed the outline at the beginning* Put the
installation instructions before the usage instructions* Removed the
explanation of MIME types because it distracts from thepurpose of
this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalonearticle at
some point)* Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone"
option to keepthe instructions simple* Voice changes like "Pressing
the Insert key will add" -> "Press theInsert key to add"* Simplified
the headers* General style edits to conform with
Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount.
Itwould benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in
reallife. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you
thinkyou'd be able to add that?
all your adjust, make the article look really great.. thx for this:
following your suggestion I've added the Header -> How you can add suggestion in
your everyday life?
with a personal example and add an image attached
Héctor Louzao @hhlp
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