On Sun, Oct 29, 2017 at 11:48:28PM +0530, Jogender Kvs wrote:
Hey all,
On Fri, Oct 20, 2017 at 10:05 PM, Paul W. Frields stickster@gmail.com wrote:
Hi Jogender,
I quite like this article. Here are some tips for you to try in tuning up the draft a bit:
Try to eliminate "we" or "I" in articles. Instead, just give simple command-style instructions where needed, like "Type the following command."
Describe a bit more beyond the simple file and theme functions. Can you show the debugger and the git integration a little more fully?
Thanks and we look forward to reading your revisions!
@Paul, I have worked on the suggested changes. Please review the same. Thanks again for your time.
It looks improved to me. We'll do some further tuning and we plan to publish within the next week or two, depending on F27 release date, since there are some required articles to push out in that time.