[article review] How to get MongoDB Server on Fedora

[Ben Cotton]

Honza,

I've taken an editorial pass at your MongoDB article[1]. I did some
significant rewriting in a couple of places in order to be careful
with how we present license issues, Fedora's stance on them, etc.
Please let me know if you object to anything.

asamalik is going to create a featured image for it and we plan to
publish it on Monday. We created a card[2] for it on the editorial
board this morning. Please note our new editorial workflow[3]

[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30452&preview=true
[2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/136?kanb...
[3] https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/workflow/

[Gregory Lee Bartholomew]

Hey Ben, I just clicked the preview link out of curiosity to see what your
"significant rewriting" looked like. I think I may have spotted a small
grammatical mistake. The third paragraph begins:

"Fedora has been always included only ..."

Is that proper English grammar?

Just FYI.

On Wed, 2020-02-12 at 16:43 -0500, Ben Cotton wrote:
> Honza,
>
> I've taken an editorial pass at your MongoDB article[1]. I did some
> significant rewriting in a couple of places in order to be careful
> with how we present license issues, Fedora's stance on them, etc.
> Please let me know if you object to anything.
>
> asamalik is going to create a featured image for it and we plan to
> publish it on Monday. We created a card[2] for it on the editorial
> board this morning. Please note our new editorial workflow[3]
>
> [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30452&preview=true
> [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/136?kanb...
> [3] https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/workflow/
>
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[Ben Cotton]

On Thu, Feb 13, 2020 at 9:42 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew
 wrote:
> Hey Ben, I just clicked the preview link out of curiosity to see what your
> "significant rewriting" looked like. I think I may have spotted a small
> grammatical mistake. The third paragraph begins:
>
> "Fedora has been always included only ..."
>
> Is that proper English grammar?

It very much is not. Thanks for catching that. It is now fixed.