Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMD...
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome.
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMD...
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this:
* What is FC and how do you install it? * Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields stickster@gmail.com wrote:
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMD...
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English is not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this:
- What is FC and how do you install it?
- Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
-- Paul
Senor Gutierrez:
I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
I need permission to access your document though.
Dale
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields stickster@gmail.com wrote:
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_
Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English
is
not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this:
- What is FC and how do you install it?
- Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
-- Paul
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Thank you very much Mr Raby! Just give me the time to separate it in sections (so I will need to ad intros and outros for each block) and after that I will need a review.
In the meantime, I will give you the access you required :)
You just need to access the document in this URL
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_Lj3JptZ5m1FMD...
Then Google will allow you to ask for document access and I will receive a notification to give you the permissions.
If you do that and you see I had not answered or allowed, please tell me because maybe the notification is lost in my inbox.
Again thanks.
P.D. Swear words in spanish are usually enough to be very communicative of your current mood :P
P.D. 2: After trying to send this email again, google asked me to give automatic access to view the document to recipients, so maybe you will be able to see it after receiving this.
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 4:35 PM Dale Raby daleraby@gmail.com wrote:
Senor Gutierrez:
I will be happy to look over your article(s) and address any linguistic issues. I speak English quite well, German OK, but my Spanish is limited to swear words my Puerto Rican roommate taught me during my army days.
I need permission to access your document though.
Dale
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 6:50 AM, Oliver Gutierrez ogutierrez@redhat.com wrote:
Yeah, I can do that. Just give me some time to do it and I can separate them into more "atomic" pieces :)
Thanks for reviewing!
On Fri, Jun 22, 2018 at 2:16 AM Paul Frields stickster@gmail.com
wrote:
On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:06 PM Oliver Gutierrez <ogutierrez@redhat.com
wrote:
Hi there.
Here it is the Fleet Commander draft article I promised to Paul for
review.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VpQhEoTXUkrzTxxVLxLED3IkZL_
Lj3JptZ5m1FMDRHU/edit?usp=sharing
Please, tell me whatever change you want to enhance it and as English
is
not my mother language, any suggestion, correction etc. is most
welcome.
Hi Oliver,
There's a LOT of good material here! However, 13 pages is just too long for a Magazine article. (Although your document looks like it might duplicate material, and it might be 6.5 pages * 2.) Can you consider cutting this up into a couple articles? They could run like this:
- What is FC and how do you install it?
- Setting up a test environment and showing how to set up a profile
-- Paul
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