Article editing

[Paul W. Frields]

Hi Eric,

The Magazine editorial board liked your article topic of setting up a
Fedora router.  However, there are some issues we'd like to work with
you on fixing.  Some of these are noted in the article in boldface.

Can you take a look, try to address these issues, and then let us know
here on our list (or on IRC #fedora-magazine) when you're ready to
have us look again?

Also, if you have any questions about the comments, please feel free
to contact us anytime.  We're here to help you, and look forward to
hearing back.