7 a.m.
The following is the schedule for this week:
Monday: the next post in the editor series by x3mboy. This one is for 'jed'
Wednesday: How to create a Fedora USB stick with fedora media writer --
ryanlerch
Friday: Secure your web domain with Certbot by jhogarth
cheers,
ryanlerch
7:02 a.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 10:00 PM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch(a)redhat.com> wrote:
The following is the schedule for this week:
Monday: the next post in the editor series by x3mboy. This one is for 'jed'
It looks like this one was not ready yet, so i did up the Media Writer
article that was slated for Wednesday, and posted it today.
x3mboy, how is this one looking for Wednesday?
cheers,
ryanlerch
Wednesday: How to create a Fedora USB stick with fedora media writer
--
ryanlerch
Friday: Secure your web domain with Certbot by jhogarth
cheers,
ryanlerch
6:19 p.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
The initial draft is ready for a editorial review.
I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were
very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and
provide any early feedback.
On 22 May 2017 at 13:02, Ryan Lerch <rlerch(a)redhat.com> wrote:
> On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 10:00 PM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch(a)redhat.com> wrote:
>
>> The following is the schedule for this week:
>>
>> Monday: the next post in the editor series by x3mboy. This one is for
'jed'
>>
>
> It looks like this one was not ready yet, so i did up the Media Writer
> article that was slated for Wednesday, and posted it today.
>
> x3mboy, how is this one looking for Wednesday?
>
> cheers,
> ryanlerch
>
>
>> Wednesday: How to create a Fedora USB stick with fedora media writer --
>> ryanlerch
>> Friday: Secure your web domain with Certbot by jhogarth
>>
>> cheers,
>> ryanlerch
>>
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10:30 a.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 12:19:10AM +0100, James Hogarth wrote:
The initial draft is ready for a editorial review.
I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were
very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and
provide any early feedback.
This is great stuff, James. I have it open now and I'm making a few
minor readability changes.
One hint for future writing: Try to avoid gerunds ("-ing" words),
"will" future tense, and other passive voice indicators wherever
possible. This makes articles easier to read for everyone, including
those who aren't native speakers.
--
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3:04 p.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
On Fri., 26 May 2017 at 1:30 am, Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 12:19:10AM +0100, James Hogarth wrote:
> The initial draft is ready for a editorial review.
>
> I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were
> very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and
> provide any early feedback.
This is great stuff, James. I have it open now and I'm making a few
minor readability changes.
I will get the featured image for this one done today after the meeting
too.
--ryanlerch
One hint for future writing: Try to avoid gerunds ("-ing"
words),
"will" future tense, and other passive voice indicators wherever
possible. This makes articles easier to read for everyone, including
those who aren't native speakers.
--
Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/
gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717
http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/
The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com
3:08 p.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
Thanks Paul .. I really appreciate the feedback on readability tips as
it's always an area I struggle in.
With regards to that paragraph you were unsure about, I really wanted
to link back to our older letsencrypt webroot article and that seemed
a decent way to lead into that.
I'm of course open to suggestions for a better way of handling it :)
On 25 May 2017 at 16:30, Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 12:19:10AM +0100, James Hogarth wrote:
>> The initial draft is ready for a editorial review.
>>
>> I've enabled the public preview link as the certbot developers were
>> very happy to hear about the article and wanted to take a look and
>> provide any early feedback.
>
> This is great stuff, James. I have it open now and I'm making a few
> minor readability changes.
>
> One hint for future writing: Try to avoid gerunds ("-ing" words),
> "will" future tense, and other passive voice indicators wherever
> possible. This makes articles easier to read for everyone, including
> those who aren't native speakers.
>
> --
> Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/
> gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717
> http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/
> The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com
4:25 p.m.
New subject: [magazine] Re: Schedule this week
On Thu, May 25, 2017 at 09:08:24PM +0100, James Hogarth wrote:
Thanks Paul .. I really appreciate the feedback on readability tips
as
it's always an area I struggle in.
With regards to that paragraph you were unsure about, I really wanted
to link back to our older letsencrypt webroot article and that seemed
a decent way to lead into that.
I'm of course open to suggestions for a better way of handling it :)
Looks like we found a good way to tag a transition onto that
paragraph, it's good to go!
--
Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/
gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717
http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/
The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com
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