Article Ready for Review (Freeplane)

Here is the Link of the Article:

https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=31141&preview=1&_ppp=9f2e7a5898
Regards.,
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Héctor Louzao @hhlp
He / Him / His 
Fedora Project Contributor
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Hhlp
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[Ben Cotton]

Hi Héctor,

I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly significant
edits, so please review it and let me know what you think. A short
summary:

* Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links
* Removed use of first person
* Removed the outline at the beginning
* Put the installation instructions before the usage instructions
* Removed the explanation of MIME types because it distracts from the
purpose of this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalone
article at some point)
* Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone" option to keep
the instructions simple
* Voice changes like "Pressing the Insert key will add" -> "Press the
Insert key to add"
* Simplified the headers
* General style edits to conform with
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/

Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount. It
would benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in real
life. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you think
you'd be able to add that?

El jue, 04-06-2020 a las 11:34 -0400, Ben Cotton escribió:
> Hi Héctor,
> I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly
> significantedits, so please review it and let me know what you think.
> A shortsummary:
> Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links* Removed
>
> use of first person* Removed the outline at the beginning* Put the
> installation instructions before the usage instructions* Removed the
> explanation of MIME types because it distracts from thepurpose of
> this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalonearticle at
> some point)* Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone"
> option to keepthe instructions simple* Voice changes like "Pressing
> the Insert key will add" -> "Press theInsert key to add"* Simplified
> the headers* General style edits to conform with
> https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
>
> Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount.
> Itwould benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in
> reallife. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you
> thinkyou'd be able to add that?

[Ben Cotton]

On Fri, Jun 5, 2020 at 10:10 AM  wrote:
> following your suggestion I've added the Header -> How you can add suggestion in your everyday life?
> with a personal example and add an image attached

Looks great! I made a few small wording changes and scheduled this
post to run Monday morning.