Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary --------------- * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
* Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09) * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38) * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
* Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43) * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
* Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32) * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58) * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
* Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30) * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01) * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42) * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22) * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28) * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34) * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
* Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18) * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31) * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
* Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46) * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items ------------ * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
Action Items, by person ----------------------- * jakfrost * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting * ryanlerch * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 * stickster * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly * **UNASSIGNED** * (none)
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Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05)
--- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42)
ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
--- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22)
ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28)
--- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30)
ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34)
ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
Action Items, by person
- jakfrost
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
- ryanlerch
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- **UNASSIGNED**
- (none)
People Present (lines said)
- stickster (109)
- jakfrost (18)
- ryanlerch (14)
- zodbot (12)
- gregbartholomew_ (11)
- sdgathman (6)
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Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05)
--- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42)
ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
--- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22)
ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28)
--- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30)
ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34)
ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
Action Items, by person
- jakfrost
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
- ryanlerch
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- **UNASSIGNED**
- (none)
People Present (lines said)
- stickster (109)
- jakfrost (18)
- ryanlerch (14)
- zodbot (12)
- gregbartholomew_ (11)
- sdgathman (6)
- pjones (2)
- asamalik (0)
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You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
* ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42) * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22) * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28) * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34) * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
Action Items, by person
- jakfrost
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
- ryanlerch
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- **UNASSIGNED**
- (none)
People Present (lines said)
- stickster (109)
- jakfrost (18)
- ryanlerch (14)
- zodbot (12)
- gregbartholomew_ (11)
- sdgathman (6)
- pjones (2)
- asamalik (0)
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Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
=========================================
#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
* ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42) * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22) * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28) * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34) * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
Action Items, by person
- jakfrost
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
- ryanlerch
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
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I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
* ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42) * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22) * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28) * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34) * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
Action Items
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
- ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
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- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
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I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about," etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04...
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Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are available at https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... .
Meeting summary
Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
- Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
- March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, 20:05:56)
Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
- ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access (stickster, 20:11:52)
Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending (stickster, 20:12:32)
- --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc (stickster, 20:13:58)
- ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 (stickster, 20:15:19)
Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... (stickster, 20:16:30)
- ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, 20:25:01)
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost
* ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf (stickster, 20:26:42) * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd (stickster, 20:34:22) * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 (stickster, 20:36:28) * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status (stickster, 20:42:34) * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly (stickster, 20:42:45)
Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
- --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
- LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc (stickster, 20:47:31)
- ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
- AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
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- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
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- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
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- jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
- jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into drafting
- ryanlerch
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- stickster
- stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
- stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
- stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
- stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
- stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
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Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go on.
On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about," etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
Edited the mdadm On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote: > Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... > Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... > Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... > > * * * > ========================================= > #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board > ========================================= > > > Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are > available at > https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... > . > > > > Meeting summary > --------------- > * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05) > > * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09) > * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous > week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38) > * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, > 20:05:56) > > * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43) > * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network > access (stickster, 20:11:52) > > * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18) > * LINK: > https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending > (stickster, 20:12:32) > * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38) > * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc > (stickster, 20:13:58) > * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > (stickster, 20:15:19) > > * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28) > * LINK: > https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... > (stickster, 20:16:30) > * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, > 20:25:01) Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. jakfrost > * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) > * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) > * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf > (stickster, 20:26:42) > * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for > Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) > * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) > * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd > (stickster, 20:34:22) > * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > (stickster, 20:36:28) > * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) > * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > (stickster, 20:42:34) > * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > (stickster, 20:42:45) > > * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18) > * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29) > * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc > (stickster, 20:47:31) > * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them > into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52) > > * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46) > * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) > -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: > FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02) > > Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC. > > > > > Action Items > ------------ > * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access > * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article > * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article > * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr > 15 > * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into > drafting > > > > > Action Items, by person > ----------------------- > * jakfrost > * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article > * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into > drafting > * ryanlerch > * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article > * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday > Apr 15 > * stickster > * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access > * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 > * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 > * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status > * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly > * **UNASSIGNED** > * (none) > > > > > People Present (lines said) > --------------------------- > * stickster (109) > * jakfrost (18) > * ryanlerch (14) > * zodbot (12) > * gregbartholomew_ (11) > * sdgathman (6) > * pjones (2) > * asamalik (0) > > > > > Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4 > > .. _`MeetBot`: http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot > _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o...
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Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them like disks:
$ sudo -i # for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024 conv=noerror,sync ; done # for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like /dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
# losetup -D # rm -f diskfile{0..3}
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go on.
On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about," etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a definite improvement. :-)
On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote: > Edited the mdadm > On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote: >> Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >> Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >> Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >> >> * * * >> ========================================= >> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board >> ========================================= >> >> >> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are >> available at >> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >> . >> >> >> >> Meeting summary >> --------------- >> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05) >> >> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09) >> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous >> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38) >> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, >> 20:05:56) >> >> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43) >> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network >> access (stickster, 20:11:52) >> >> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18) >> * LINK: >> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending >> (stickster, 20:12:32) >> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38) >> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc >> (stickster, 20:13:58) >> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >> (stickster, 20:15:19) >> >> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28) >> * LINK: >> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... >> (stickster, 20:16:30) >> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, >> 20:25:01) > Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. > jakfrost >> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) >> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) >> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf >> (stickster, 20:26:42) >> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for >> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) >> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) >> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd >> (stickster, 20:34:22) >> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >> (stickster, 20:36:28) >> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) >> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >> (stickster, 20:42:34) >> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >> (stickster, 20:42:45) >> >> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18) >> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29) >> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc >> (stickster, 20:47:31) >> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them >> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52) >> >> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46) >> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) >> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: >> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02) >> >> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC. >> >> >> >> >> Action Items >> ------------ >> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access >> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article >> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article >> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr >> 15 >> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into >> drafting >> >> >> >> >> Action Items, by person >> ----------------------- >> * jakfrost >> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article >> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into >> drafting >> * ryanlerch >> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article >> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday >> Apr 15 >> * stickster >> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access >> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >> * **UNASSIGNED** >> * (none) >> >> >> >> >> People Present (lines said) >> --------------------------- >> * stickster (109) >> * jakfrost (18) >> * ryanlerch (14) >> * zodbot (12) >> * gregbartholomew_ (11) >> * sdgathman (6) >> * pjones (2) >> * asamalik (0) >> >> >> >> >> Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4 >> >> .. _`MeetBot`: http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot >> > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org > Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html > List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o...
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Thanks Paul. I think the article looks great. I would like to know how you got the double-dash's "--" to keep from being merged into a long dash. I have several places where I wanted the double dash, but Wordpress kept "correcting" me.
On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 10:12 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them like disks:
$ sudo -i # for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024 conv=noerror,sync ; done # for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like /dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
# losetup -D # rm -f diskfile{0..3}
Paul
That's pretty cool Paul, I'll definitely try that out sometime soon.
Steve
On 17/04/19 10:12 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them like disks:
$ sudo -i # for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024 conv=noerror,sync ; done # for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like /dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
# losetup -D # rm -f diskfile{0..3}
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go on.
On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about," etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is everything some days.
SDS
On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a > definite improvement. :-) > > On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote: >> Edited the mdadm >> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote: >>> Minutes: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >>> Minutes (text): https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >>> Log: https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >>> >>> * * * >>> ========================================= >>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board >>> ========================================= >>> >>> >>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are >>> available at >>> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019-04... >>> . >>> >>> >>> >>> Meeting summary >>> --------------- >>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05) >>> >>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09) >>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous >>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38) >>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either (stickster, >>> 20:05:56) >>> >>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43) >>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network >>> access (stickster, 20:11:52) >>> >>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18) >>> * LINK: >>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending >>> (stickster, 20:12:32) >>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38) >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc >>> (stickster, 20:13:58) >>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >>> (stickster, 20:15:19) >>> >>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28) >>> * LINK: >>> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderby=d... >>> (stickster, 20:16:30) >>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article (stickster, >>> 20:25:01) >> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think. >> jakfrost >>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster, 20:26:05) >>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24) >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf >>> (stickster, 20:26:42) >>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for >>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35) >>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03) >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd >>> (stickster, 20:34:22) >>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >>> (stickster, 20:36:28) >>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster, 20:37:30) >>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >>> (stickster, 20:42:34) >>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >>> (stickster, 20:42:45) >>> >>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18) >>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29) >>> * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc >>> (stickster, 20:47:31) >>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them >>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52) >>> >>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46) >>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch) >>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19: >>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02) >>> >>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC. >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Action Items >>> ------------ >>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access >>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article >>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article >>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr >>> 15 >>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into >>> drafting >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Action Items, by person >>> ----------------------- >>> * jakfrost >>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article >>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into >>> drafting >>> * ryanlerch >>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article >>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday >>> Apr 15 >>> * stickster >>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access >>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12 >>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19 >>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status >>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly >>> * **UNASSIGNED** >>> * (none) >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> People Present (lines said) >>> --------------------------- >>> * stickster (109) >>> * jakfrost (18) >>> * ryanlerch (14) >>> * zodbot (12) >>> * gregbartholomew_ (11) >>> * sdgathman (6) >>> * pjones (2) >>> * asamalik (0) >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4 >>> >>> .. _`MeetBot`: http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot >>> >> _______________________________________________ >> Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org >> To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org >> Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html >> List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines >> List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o... _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o...
Am I correct in thinking that the SEO score is mainly about search engine rating? If so, I doubt that such changes to the wording would make that big of a different. Search engines are always re-tuning their algorithms, so there is no one rule that will always get your page a better ranking.
One of the more heavily weighted factors, as I understand it, is the number of links pointing to your page from other pages. That tends to be determined by the usefulness of the content more than the particular wording.
On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 08:55 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about," etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 08:26 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points, though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.] Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
I think I get the gist of the concept. I cringe a bit at writing thinks such as "Use 'dd of=/dev/sda' to write to your hard drive" though. My instincts tell me it is better to write that sort of thing in a passive voice -- "The 'dd of=/dev/sda' command could be used ...". The former is a command, the latter is an explanation. Explaining how things work is great. But commanding people to do things goes against my nature a bit. I guess I'd make a lousy Klingon. :-P
Is there any danger of people going after the magazine legally because "Well, you TOLD me to ..."
Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with subheadings for more readability.
What the plugin things is readable and what I think is readable aren't always the same thing. I tend to think my grasp of human languages is a bit superior to the computer's personally.
There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and will publish since no one scheduled it already.
Paul
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