Editorial board meeting recap 2019-Apr-10

[Paul W. Frields]

Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...

* * *
=========================================
#fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
=========================================


Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
available at
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
.



Meeting summary
---------------
* Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)

* Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
  * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
    week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
  * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either  (stickster,
    20:05:56)

* Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
  * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
    access  (stickster, 20:11:52)

* Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
  * LINK:
    https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
    (stickster, 20:12:32)
  * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
  * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
    (stickster, 20:13:58)
  * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
    (stickster, 20:15:19)

* Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
  * LINK:
   
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
    (stickster, 20:16:30)
  * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
    20:25:01)
  * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster, 20:26:05)
  * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
  * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
    (stickster, 20:26:42)
  * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
    Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
  * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
  * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
    (stickster, 20:34:22)
  * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
    (stickster, 20:36:28)
  * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
  * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
    (stickster, 20:42:34)
  * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
    (stickster, 20:42:45)

* Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
  * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
  * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
    (stickster, 20:47:31)
  * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
    into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)

* Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
  * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
    -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
    FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)

Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.




Action Items
------------
* stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
* stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
* jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
* ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
* ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
  15
* stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
* stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
* stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
* jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
  drafting




Action Items, by person
-----------------------
* jakfrost
  * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
  * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
    drafting
* ryanlerch
  * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
  * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
    Apr 15
* stickster
  * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
  * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
  * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
  * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
  * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
* **UNASSIGNED**
  * (none)




People Present (lines said)
---------------------------
* stickster (109)
* jakfrost (18)
* ryanlerch (14)
* zodbot (12)
* gregbartholomew_ (11)
* sdgathman (6)
* pjones (2)
* asamalik (0)




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[Steven Snow]

Edited the mdadm
On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>  Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>
>  * * *
>  =========================================
>  #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
>  =========================================
>
>
>  Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
>  available at
>
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  .
>
>
>
>  Meeting summary
>  ---------------
>  * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
>
>  * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
>     * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
>       week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
>     * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either  (stickster,
>       20:05:56)
>
>  * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
>     * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
>       access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
>
>  * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
>     * LINK:
>       https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
>       (stickster, 20:12:32)
>     * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
>     * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
>       (stickster, 20:13:58)
>     * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>       (stickster, 20:15:19)
>
>  * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
>     * LINK:
>      
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
>       (stickster, 20:16:30)
>     * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
>       20:25:01) 
Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
jakfrost
>     * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster,
> 20:26:05)
>     * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
>     * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
>       (stickster, 20:26:42)
>     * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
>       Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
>     * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
>     * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
>       (stickster, 20:34:22)
>     * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>       (stickster, 20:36:28)
>     * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
>     * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>       (stickster, 20:42:34)
>     * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>       (stickster, 20:42:45)
>
>  * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
>     * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
>     * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
>       (stickster, 20:47:31)
>     * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
>       into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
>
>  * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
>     * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
>       -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
>       FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
>
>  Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
>
>
>
>
>  Action Items
>  ------------
>  * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
>  * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>  * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>  * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>  * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
>     15
>  * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>  * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>  * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>  * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
>     drafting
>
>
>
>
>  Action Items, by person
>  -----------------------
>  * jakfrost
>     * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>     * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
>       drafting
>  * ryanlerch
>     * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>     * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
>       Apr 15
>  * stickster
>     * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
>     * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>     * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>     * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>     * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>  * **UNASSIGNED**
>     * (none)
>
>
>
>
>  People Present (lines said)
>  ---------------------------
>  * stickster (109)
>  * jakfrost (18)
>  * ryanlerch (14)
>  * zodbot (12)
>  * gregbartholomew_ (11)
>  * sdgathman (6)
>  * pjones (2)
>  * asamalik (0)
>
>
>
>
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[Gregory Lee Bartholomew]

Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a
definite improvement. :-)

On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
>  Edited the mdadm
>  On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>  > Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  > Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  > Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  > 
>  > * * *
>  > =========================================
>  > #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
>  > =========================================
>  > 
>  > 
>  > Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
>  > available at
>  >
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>  > .
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > Meeting summary
>  > ---------------
>  > * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
>  > 
>  > * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
>  >    * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
>  >      week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
>  >    * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either  (stickster,
>  >      20:05:56)
>  > 
>  > * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
>  >    * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
>  >      access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
>  > 
>  > * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
>  >    * LINK:
>  >      https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
>  >      (stickster, 20:12:32)
>  >    * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
>  >    * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
>  >      (stickster, 20:13:58)
>  >    * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>  >      (stickster, 20:15:19)
>  > 
>  > * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
>  >    * LINK:
>  >     
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
>  >      (stickster, 20:16:30)
>  >    * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
>  >      20:25:01)
>  Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
>  jakfrost
>  >    * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster, 20:26:05)
>  >    * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
>  >    * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
>  >      (stickster, 20:26:42)
>  >    * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
>  >      Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
>  >    * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
>  >    * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
>  >      (stickster, 20:34:22)
>  >    * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>  >      (stickster, 20:36:28)
>  >    * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
>  >    * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>  >      (stickster, 20:42:34)
>  >    * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>  >      (stickster, 20:42:45)
>  > 
>  > * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
>  >    * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
>  >    * LINK: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
>  >      (stickster, 20:47:31)
>  >    * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
>  >      into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
>  > 
>  > * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
>  >    * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
>  >      -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
>  >      FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
>  > 
>  > Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > Action Items
>  > ------------
>  > * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
>  > * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>  > * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>  > * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>  > * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
>  >    15
>  > * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>  > * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>  > * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>  > * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
>  >    drafting
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > Action Items, by person
>  > -----------------------
>  > * jakfrost
>  >    * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>  >    * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
>  >      drafting
>  > * ryanlerch
>  >    * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>  >    * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
>  >      Apr 15
>  > * stickster
>  >    * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
>  >    * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>  >    * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>  >    * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>  >    * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>  > * **UNASSIGNED**
>  >    * (none)
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
>  > People Present (lines said)
>  > ---------------------------
>  > * stickster (109)
>  > * jakfrost (18)
>  > * ryanlerch (14)
>  > * zodbot (12)
>  > * gregbartholomew_ (11)
>  > * sdgathman (6)
>  > * pjones (2)
>  > * asamalik (0)
>  > 
>  > 
>  > 
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[Steven Snow]

You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't 
try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands 
and nothing to do with the topic. :-)


On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
>  Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements
> is a
>  definite improvement. :-)
>
>  On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> > Edited the mdadm
> > On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >> Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >> Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >> Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>
> >> * * *
> >> =========================================
> >> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >> =========================================
> >>
> >>
> >> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >> available at
> >>
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >> .
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> Meeting summary
> >> ---------------
> >> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>
> >> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>     * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
> >>       week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>     * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either  (stickster,
> >>       20:05:56)
> >>
> >> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>     * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> >>       access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>
> >> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>     * LINK:
> >>       https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>       (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>     * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>     * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>       (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>     * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>       (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>
> >> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>     * LINK:
> >>      
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>       (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>     * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
> >>       20:25:01)
> > Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> > jakfrost
> >>     * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster, 20:26:05)
> >>     * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>     * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>       (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>     * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
> >>       Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>     * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>     * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>       (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>     * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>       (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>     * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>     * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>       (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>     * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>       (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>
> >> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>     * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>     * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>       (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>     * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
> >>       into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>
> >> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>     * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
> >>       -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr 19:
> >>       FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>
> >> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> Action Items
> >> ------------
> >> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
> >>     15
> >> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>     drafting
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> Action Items, by person
> >> -----------------------
> >> * jakfrost
> >>     * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>     * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>       drafting
> >> * ryanlerch
> >>     * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>     * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
> >>       Apr 15
> >> * stickster
> >>     * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>     * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>     * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>     * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>     * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
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> >> * jakfrost (18)
> >> * ryanlerch (14)
> >> * zodbot (12)
> >> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >> * sdgathman (6)
> >> * pjones (2)
> >> * asamalik (0)
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[Paul Frields]

Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
sense, it's passive voice. So for example:

Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]

Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
subheadings for more readability.

There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
will publish since no one scheduled it already.


Paul

On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
>
> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't
> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
>
>
> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> > Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a
> > definite improvement. :-)
> >
> > On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >> Edited the mdadm
> >> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>
> >>> * * *
> >>> =========================================
> >>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>> =========================================
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>> available at
> >>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>> .
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Meeting summary
> >>> ---------------
> >>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>
> >>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>     * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
> >>>       week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>     * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either 
(stickster,
> >>>       20:05:56)
> >>>
> >>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>     * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> >>>       access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>
> >>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>     * LINK:
> >>>       https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>       (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>     * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>     * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>       (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>     * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>       (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>
> >>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>     * LINK:
> >>>      
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>       (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>     * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
> >>>       20:25:01)
> >> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >> jakfrost
> >>>     * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster,
20:26:05)
> >>>     * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>     * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>       (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>     * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
for
> >>>       Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>     * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>     * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>       (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>     * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>       (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>     * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>>     * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>       (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>     * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>       (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>
> >>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>     * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>     * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>       (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>     * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
> >>>       into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>
> >>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>     * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
(ryanlerch)
> >>>       -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr
19:
> >>>       FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>
> >>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Action Items
> >>> ------------
> >>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday
Apr
> >>>     15
> >>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>     drafting
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Action Items, by person
> >>> -----------------------
> >>> * jakfrost
> >>>     * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>     * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>       drafting
> >>> * ryanlerch
> >>>     * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>     * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
Monday
> >>>       Apr 15
> >>> * stickster
> >>>     * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>>     * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>     * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>     * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>     * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>     * (none)
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> People Present (lines said)
> >>> ---------------------------
> >>> * stickster (109)
> >>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>> * zodbot (12)
> >>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>> * pjones (2)
> >>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
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[Steven Snow]

I did use the Yoast SEO,  and I worked at trying to get the readability 
score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content 
or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to 
bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last 
night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is 
everything some days.

SDS

On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>  Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
>  though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
>  help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
>  passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
>  rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
>  the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
>  sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
>
>  Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
>  reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
>  Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
>  array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
>
>  Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
>  subheadings for more readability.
>
>  There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
>  engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
>  will publish since no one scheduled it already.
>
>
>  Paul
>
>  On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> > You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I couldn't
> > try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> > and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >
> >
> > On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is a
> >> definite improvement. :-)
> >>
> >> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>> Edited the mdadm
> >>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>> Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>> Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>> Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>
> >>>> * * *
> >>>> =========================================
> >>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>> =========================================
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>>> available at
> >>>>
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>> .
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Meeting summary
> >>>> ---------------
> >>>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>      * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from previous
> >>>>        week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>      * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either 
> (stickster,
> >>>>        20:05:56)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>      * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> >>>>        access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> >>>>        https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>      * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>      * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> >>>>       
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>      * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article  (stickster,
> >>>>        20:25:01)
> >>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>> jakfrost
> >>>>      * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster,
> 20:26:05)
> >>>>      * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>      * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
> for
> >>>>        Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>      * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>      * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
> 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>      * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>>>      * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>      * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>      * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>>      * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>        (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>      * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
> >>>>        into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>
> >>>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>      * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
> (ryanlerch)
> >>>>        -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) -- Fri Apr
> 19:
> >>>>        FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>
> >>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Action Items
> >>>> ------------
> >>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for Monday Apr
> >>>>      15
> >>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>>      drafting
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>> -----------------------
> >>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>      * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>      * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>>        drafting
> >>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>      * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>      * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
> Monday
> >>>>        Apr 15
> >>>> * stickster
> >>>>      * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network access
> >>>>      * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>      * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>      * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>      * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>>      * (none)
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> People Present (lines said)
> >>>> ---------------------------
> >>>> * stickster (109)
> >>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>
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[Paul Frields]

I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
fine-tuning.

Paul

On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
>
> I did use the Yoast SEO,  and I worked at trying to get the readability
> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> everything some days.
>
> SDS
>
> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> > Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> > though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> > help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> > passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> > rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
> > the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> > sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >
> > Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> > reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> > Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> > array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >
> > Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> > subheadings for more readability.
> >
> > There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> > engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> > will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >
> >
> > Paul
> >
> > On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> >> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
couldn't
> >> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> >> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>
> >>
> >> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is
a
> >>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>
> >>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * * *
> >>>>> =========================================
> >>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>>>> available at
> >>>>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> .
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>> ---------------
> >>>>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>>      * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from
previous
> >>>>>        week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>>      * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either 
(stickster,
> >>>>>        20:05:56)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social
network
> >>>>>        access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
> >>>>>       
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>>      * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
> >>>>>       
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article 
(stickster,
> >>>>>        20:25:01)
> >>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>> jakfrost
> >>>>>      * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster,
20:26:05)
> >>>>>      * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for
> >>>>>        Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>>      * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>>      * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster,
20:37:30)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on
status
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>>      * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>>>      * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>>        (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>>      * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
get them
> >>>>>        into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>>      * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
(ryanlerch)
> >>>>>        -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) --
Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>>        FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Action Items
> >>>>> ------------
> >>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
> >>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
Monday Apr
> >>>>>      15
> >>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into
> >>>>>      drafting
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>>      * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>      * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into
> >>>>>        drafting
> >>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>>      * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>      * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
for Monday
> >>>>>        Apr 15
> >>>>> * stickster
> >>>>>      * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
> >>>>>      * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>>      * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>      * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>      * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
> >>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>>>      * (none)
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> People Present (lines said)
> >>>>> ---------------------------
> >>>>> * stickster (109)
> >>>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
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[Steven Snow]

Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up 
sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had 
said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go
on.


On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>  I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that
> more
>  active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
>  etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
>  passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
>  fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
>  too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
>  fine-tuning.
>
>  Paul
>
>  On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> > I did use the Yoast SEO,  and I worked at trying to get the readability
> > score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> > or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> > bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> > night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> > everything some days.
> >
> > SDS
> >
> > On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> >> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> >> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> >> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> >> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> >> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
> >> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> >> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >>
> >> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> >> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> >> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> >> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >>
> >> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> >> subheadings for more readability.
> >>
> >> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> >> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> >> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >>
> >>
> >> Paul
> >>
> >> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> >>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
> couldn't
> >>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> >>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is
> a
> >>>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>>
> >>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>>> Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>> Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>> Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * * *
> >>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>>>>> available at
> >>>>>>
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>> .
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>>> ---------------
> >>>>>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>>>       * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from
> previous
> >>>>>>         week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>>>       * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either 
> (stickster,
> >>>>>>         20:05:56)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social
> network
> >>>>>>         access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> >>>>>>        
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>>>       * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
> 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> >>>>>>        
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article 
> (stickster,
> >>>>>>         20:25:01)
> >>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>>> jakfrost
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article  (stickster,
> 20:26:05)
> >>>>>>       * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
> article for
> >>>>>>         Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>>>       * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
> 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>>>       * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora ---  (stickster,
> 20:37:30)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on
> status
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
> properly
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>>>       * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>>>>       * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>>>         (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>>>       * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
> get them
> >>>>>>         into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>>>       * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
> (ryanlerch)
> >>>>>>         -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) --
> Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>>>         FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Action Items
> >>>>>> ------------
> >>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> access
> >>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
> Monday Apr
> >>>>>>       15
> >>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
> >>>>>>       drafting
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>>>       * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>       * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
> into
> >>>>>>         drafting
> >>>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>>>       * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>       * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
> for Monday
> >>>>>>         Apr 15
> >>>>>> * stickster
> >>>>>>       * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
> access
> >>>>>>       * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
> 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>       * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
> 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>       * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>>       * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
> properly
> >>>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>>>>       * (none)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> People Present (lines said)
> >>>>>> ---------------------------
> >>>>>> * stickster (109)
> >>>>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>>>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
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[Paul Frields]

Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID
stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a
couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them
like disks:

$ sudo -i
# for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024
conv=noerror,sync ; done
# for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done

Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like
/dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:

# losetup -D
# rm -f diskfile{0..3}

Paul

On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
>
> Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
> sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
> said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must
go on.
>
>
> On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> > I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
> > active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read
about,"
> > etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
> > passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
> > fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text
up
> > too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
> > fine-tuning.
> >
> > Paul
> >
> > On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> >> I did use the Yoast SEO,  and I worked at trying to get the readability
> >> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> >> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> >> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> >> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> >> everything some days.
> >>
> >> SDS
> >>
> >> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> >>> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> >>> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> >>> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> >>> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> >>> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by
Klingons" at
> >>> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> >>> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >>>
> >>> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> >>> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> >>> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> >>> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >>>
> >>> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> >>> subheadings for more readability.
> >>>
> >>> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> >>> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> >>> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Paul
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt;
wrote:
> >>>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
couldn't
> >>>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it
stands
> >>>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the
statements is a
> >>>>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>>>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * * *
> >>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full
logs are
> >>>>>>> available at
> >>>>>>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>> .
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>>>> ---------------
> >>>>>>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>>>>       * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up
significantly from previous
> >>>>>>>         week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>>>>       * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby
either  (stickster,
> >>>>>>>         20:05:56)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about
extending social network
> >>>>>>>         access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
> >>>>>>>        
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>>>>       * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster,
20:13:38)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and
publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
> >>>>>>>        
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article 
(stickster,
> >>>>>>>         20:25:01)
> >>>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>>>> jakfrost
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article 
(stickster, 20:26:05)
> >>>>>>>       * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster,
20:26:24)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on
Fedora IoT article for
> >>>>>>>         Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>>>>       * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article
for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>>>>       * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- 
(stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to
advise on status
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is
updated properly
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>>>>       * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster,
20:47:29)
> >>>>>>>       * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>>>>         (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>>>>       * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell
tuning and get them
> >>>>>>>         into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>>>>       * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr
15: K3s (ryanlerch)
> >>>>>>>         -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch
image) -- Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>>>>         FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Action Items
> >>>>>>> ------------
> >>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social
network access
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for Monday Apr
> >>>>>>>       15
> >>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on
status
> >>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get
them into
> >>>>>>>       drafting
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>>>>       * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>>       * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
get them into
> >>>>>>>         drafting
> >>>>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>>>>       * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>>       * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for Monday
> >>>>>>>         Apr 15
> >>>>>>> * stickster
> >>>>>>>       * stickster email bkp to see about extending
social network access
> >>>>>>>       * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>>>>       * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
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status
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properly
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[Gregory Lee Bartholomew]

On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 08:26 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
>  Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
>  though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
>  help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
>  passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
>  rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
>  the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
>  sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
>  
>  Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
>  reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
>  Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
>  array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.] 
I think I get the gist of the concept. I cringe a bit at writing thinks such as
"Use 'dd of=/dev/sda' to write to your hard drive" though. My instincts
tell me
it is better to write that sort of thing in a passive voice -- "The 'dd
of=/dev/sda' command could be used ...". The former is a command, the latter is
an explanation. Explaining how things work is great. But commanding people to do
things goes against my nature a bit. I guess I'd make a lousy Klingon. :-P

Is there any danger of people going after the magazine legally because "Well,
you TOLD me to ..."

>  
>  Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
>  subheadings for more readability. 
What the plugin things is readable and what I think is readable aren't always
the same thing. I tend to think my grasp of human languages is a bit superior to
the computer's personally.

>  
>  There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
>  engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
>  will publish since no one scheduled it already.
>  
>  
>  Paul

[Gregory Lee Bartholomew]

Am I correct in thinking that the SEO score is mainly about search engine
rating? If so, I doubt that such changes to the wording would make that big of a
different. Search engines are always re-tuning their algorithms, so there is no
one rule that will always get your page a better ranking.

One of the more heavily weighted factors, as I understand it, is the number of
links pointing to your page from other pages. That tends to be determined by the
usefulness of the content more than the particular wording.

On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 08:55 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
>  I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that
> more
>  active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
>  etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
>  passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
>  fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
>  too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
>  fine-tuning.
>  
>  Paul

[Gregory Lee Bartholomew]

Thanks Paul. I think the article looks great. I would like to know how you got
the double-dash's "--" to keep from being merged into a long dash. I have
several places where I wanted the double dash, but Wordpress kept "correcting"
me.

On Wed, 2019-04-17 at 10:12 -0400, Paul Frields wrote:
>  Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID
>  stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a
>  couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them
>  like disks:
>  
>  $ sudo -i
>  # for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024
>  conv=noerror,sync ; done
>  # for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
>  
>  Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like
>  /dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
>  
>  # losetup -D
>  # rm -f diskfile{0..3}
>  
>  Paul

[Steven Snow]

That's pretty cool Paul, I'll definitely try that out sometime soon.

Steve


On 17/04/19 10:12 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>  Yup, makes sense. By the way, I do happen to know a way to test RAID
>  stuff, just in case you get the yen to play around. You can make a
>  couple large files, assign loop block devices to them, and treat them
>  like disks:
>
>  $ sudo -i
>  # for i in {0..3}; do dd if=/dev/zero of=diskfile$i bs=1M count=1024
>  conv=noerror,sync ; done
>  # for i in diskfile* ; do losetup -f $i ; done
>
>  Now you have /dev/loop0 through /dev/loop3 that you can treat like
>  /dev/sd{a,b,c,d} and make an array. When you're done, just:
>
>  # losetup -D
>  # rm -f diskfile{0..3}
>
>  Paul
>
>  On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 9:29 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> > Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
> > sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
> > said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must
> go on.
> >
> >
> > On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> >> I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
> >> active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read
> about,"
> >> etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
> >> passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
> >> fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text
> up
> >> too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
> >> fine-tuning.
> >>
> >> Paul
> >>
> >> On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> >>> I did use the Yoast SEO,  and I worked at trying to get the readability
> >>> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> >>> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> >>> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> >>> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> >>> everything some days.
> >>>
> >>> SDS
> >>>
> >>> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> >>>> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> >>>> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> >>>> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> >>>> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> >>>> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by
> Klingons" at
> >>>> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> >>>> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >>>>
> >>>> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> >>>> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> >>>> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> >>>> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >>>>
> >>>> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> >>>> subheadings for more readability.
> >>>>
> >>>> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> >>>> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> >>>> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Paul
> >>>>
> >>>> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com&gt;
> wrote:
> >>>>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
> couldn't
> >>>>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it
> stands
> >>>>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>>>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the
> statements is a
> >>>>>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>>>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>>>>> Minutes:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>>> Minutes (text):
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>>> Log:
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * * *
> >>>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full
> logs are
> >>>>>>>> available at
> >>>>>>>>
> https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>>>> .
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>>>>> ---------------
> >>>>>>>> * Roll call  (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Last week stats  (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>>>>>        * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up
> significantly from previous
> >>>>>>>>          week 63K  (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>>>>>        * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby
> either  (stickster,
> >>>>>>>>          20:05:56)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Social network access  (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about
> extending social network
> >>>>>>>>          access  (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Pending review posts  (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> >>>>>>>>         
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>>>>>        * --- How do you Fedora? ---  (stickster,
> 20:13:38)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and
> publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Drafts to review  (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> >>>>>>>>         
> https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article 
> (stickster,
> >>>>>>>>          20:25:01)
> >>>>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>>>>> jakfrost
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article 
> (stickster, 20:26:05)
> >>>>>>>>        * --- K3s on Fedora IoT ---  (stickster,
> 20:26:24)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on
> Fedora IoT article for
> >>>>>>>>          Monday Apr 15  (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>>>>>        * --- FFSend ---  (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article
> for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>>>>>        * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- 
> (stickster, 20:37:30)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to
> advise on status
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is
> updated properly
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Pitches to review  (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>>>>>        * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB ---  (stickster,
> 20:47:29)
> >>>>>>>>        * LINK:
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>>>>>          (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>>>>>        * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell
> tuning and get them
> >>>>>>>>          into drafting  (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> * Publishing schedule!  (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>>>>>        * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr
> 15: K3s (ryanlerch)
> >>>>>>>>          -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch
> image) -- Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>>>>>          FFSend (stickster)  (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Action Items
> >>>>>>>> ------------
> >>>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social
> network access
> >>>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
> 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
> for Monday Apr
> >>>>>>>>        15
> >>>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
> 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
> properly
> >>>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get
> them into
> >>>>>>>>        drafting
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>>>>>        * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>>>>>        * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
> get them into
> >>>>>>>>          drafting
> >>>>>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>>>>>        * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>>>>>        * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
> article for Monday
> >>>>>>>>          Apr 15
> >>>>>>>> * stickster
> >>>>>>>>        * stickster email bkp to see about extending
> social network access
> >>>>>>>>        * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
> 2019-04-12
> >>>>>>>>        * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
> 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>>>>>        * stickster email DVD article author to advise on
> status
> >>>>>>>>        * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
> properly
> >>>>>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
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> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>>
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> >>>>>>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>>>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>>>>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>>>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>>>>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>>>>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>>>>>> * asamalik (0)
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