[magazine] Short How To Article: Pitch

[charles profitt]

Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking
for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.

https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24

Charles

[magazine] Re: Short How To Article: Pitch

[Lailah]

Hey, Charles!

Love this article!  And I'm looking forward to see it published.  I
want to try the game.


Cheers,
Sylvia


On Sun, 2016-10-02 at 00:21 -0400, charles profitt wrote:
>  Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are
> looking
>  for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.
>  
>  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24
>  
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[magazine] Re: Short How To Article: Pitch

[Paul W. Frields]

On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote:
>  Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are
> looking
>  for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.
>  
>  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24 
This is just fine for a short how-to article.  I did some light
editing.  But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling
users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the
reader how to find those in the game itself to get started.  No need
to explain all the rules in this article, though. 

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[magazine] Re: Short How To Article: Pitch

[charles profitt]

Paul:

Thanks for the feedback. I did some more editing -- added a video (youtube) and
information on where to get instructions on how to play the game.

I changed the article to pending review.

https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=57367d1000

Charles


 ---- On Tue, 04 Oct 2016 05:55:04 -0700 Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote
---- 
>  On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote:
>  > Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking
>  > for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.
>  > 
>  > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24
>  
>  This is just fine for a short how-to article.  I did some light
>  editing.  But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling
>  users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the
>  reader how to find those in the game itself to get started.  No need
>  to explain all the rules in this article, though. 
>  
>  -- 
>  Paul W. Frields                                http://paul.frields.org/
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>    http://redhat.com/   -  -  -  -   http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/
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[magazine] Re: Short How To Article: Pitch

[Lailah]

Charles & all:

Your FreeOrion article looks perfect to me.


Thanks!

Sylvia

[magazine] Re: Short How To Article: Pitch

[Justin W. Flory]

On 10/04/2016 10:08 AM, charles profitt wrote:
>  Paul:
>
>  Thanks for the feedback. I did some more editing -- added a video (youtube) and
> information on where to get instructions on how to play the game.
>
>  I changed the article to pending review.
>
>  https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=57367d1000
>
>  Charles
>  
Hey Charles! We took another look at this one during the meeting as 
well. With the previous mentioned feedback, seems great! Ryan is going 
to take this one for any final editing and schedule it for Friday, 
October 14, 2016.

Thanks for putting this together!

>   ---- On Tue, 04 Oct 2016 05:55:04 -0700 Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com&gt;
> wrote ----
>   > On Sun, Oct 02, 2016 at 12:21:21AM -0400, charles profitt wrote:
>   > > Let me know if this fits the short how-to article that we are looking
>   > > for to help drive some traffic to the magazine.
>   > >
>   > > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14796&preview=1&_ppp=1fde0cfb24
>   >
>   > This is just fine for a short how-to article.  I did some light
>   > editing.  But it could also use a few sentences at the end telling
>   > users where to find resources like game directions, or else tell the
>   > reader how to find those in the game itself to get started.  No need
>   > to explain all the rules in this article, though.
>   > 
-- 
Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com