Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't usually sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the tips, just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to be something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing though I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Hi all,
I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops from Troy's article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do that. :(
However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be reviewed! Would anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready for tomorrow?
As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time allows.
Thanks! Adam
[1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ [2] https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot anything else, no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after it goes live.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't usually sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the tips, just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to be something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing though I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway, so I'll give it a try.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: > Hi all, > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the > desktops > from > Troy's > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able > to do > that. :( > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be > reviewed! > Would > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's > ready > for > tomorrow? > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time > allows. > > Thanks! > Adam > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ > [2] > https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb... > > -- > > Adam Šamalík > --------------------------- > Senior Software Engineer > Red Hat > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org > To unsubscribe send an email to > magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org > Fedora Code of Conduct: > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > List Guidelines: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o... _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o...
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I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could not find the button to do so in Wordpress.
Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and schedule it sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot anything else, no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after it goes live.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't usually sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the tips, just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to be something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing though I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to take care of it.
Stephen On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote: > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice > anyway, > so > I'll give it > a try. > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: > > Hi all, > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the > > desktops > > from > > Troy's > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able > > to do > > that. :( > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be > > reviewed! > > Would > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's > > ready > > for > > tomorrow? > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time > > allows. > > > > Thanks! > > Adam > > > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ > > [2] > > https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb... > > > > -- > > > > Adam Šamalík > > --------------------------- > > Senior Software Engineer > > Red Hat > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > > magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org > > To unsubscribe send an email to > > magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org > > Fedora Code of Conduct: > > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > > List Guidelines: > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > > List Archives: > > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o... > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- > magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org > To unsubscribe send an email to > magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org > Fedora Code of Conduct: > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ > List Guidelines: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines > List Archives: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o... _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@lists.fedoraproject.o...
Great work! Thanks for saving the day!
Scheduled.
On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew < gregory.lee.bartholomew@gmail.com> wrote:
I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could not find the button to do so in Wordpress.
Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and schedule it sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot
anything else,
no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after it goes
live.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't usually sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the tips, just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to be something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing though I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your feedback. In the meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote: > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around > to > take > care of it. > > Stephen > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew > wrote: > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice > > anyway, > > so > > I'll give it > > a try. > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote: > > > Hi all, > > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the > > > desktops > > > from > > > Troy's > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able > > > to do > > > that. :( > > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be > > > reviewed! > > > Would > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's > > > ready > > > for > > > tomorrow? > > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time > > > allows. > > > > > > Thanks! > > > Adam > > > > > > [1] https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/ > > > [2] > > >
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
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Yes, thanks to Gregory On Wed, 2020-03-11 at 07:09 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Great work! Thanks for saving the day!
Scheduled.
On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew < gregory.lee.bartholomew@gmail.com> wrote:
I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could not find the
button to do so in Wordpress.
Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and schedule it
sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot
anything else,
no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after
it goes live.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't
usually
sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the
tips,
just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that
shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to
be
something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing
though
I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew
wrote:
Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to
bring
it into
better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using
sentence case
instead of title case):
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend
using
sentence case for
the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the
imperative tense
to make
the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO
happy. I
don't think
it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think
might be
poorly or
incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image
now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I
know that's
not
a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits
Silverblue
(and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container
build/run
options. Perhaps something from the container world would
be
suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew
wrote:
> Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request
your
> feedback. In the
> meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
>
> On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
> > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm
around
> > to
> > take
> > care of it.
> >
> > Stephen
> > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee
Bartholomew
> > wrote:
> > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the
practice
> > > anyway,
> > > so
> > > I'll give it
> > > a try.
> > >
> > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik
wrote:
> > > > Hi all,
> > > >
> > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of
the
> > > > desktops
> > > > from
> > > > Troy's
> > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't
be able
> > > > to do
> > > > that. :(
> > > >
> > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to
be
> > > > reviewed!
> > > > Would
> > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so
it's
> > > > ready
> > > > for
> > > > tomorrow?
> > > >
> > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning
if time
> > > > allows.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks!
> > > > Adam
> > > >
> > > > [1]
https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/
> > > > [2]
> > > >
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
> > > >
> > > > --
> > > >
> > > > Adam Šamalík
> > > > ---------------------------
> > > > Senior Software Engineer
> > > > Red Hat
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> > > >
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Much more thanks to Stephen for providing an article. 🙂
My thanks was meant to both of you! :)
On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 3:00 PM Gregory Lee Bartholomew < gregory.lee.bartholomew@gmail.com> wrote:
Much more thanks to Stephen for providing an article. 🙂
Gregory Lee Bartholomew PGP Key ID: 3B67510E
On March 11, 2020 1:20:24 PM UTC, Stephen Snow s40w5s@gmail.com wrote:
Yes, thanks to Gregory On Wed, 2020-03-11 at 07:09 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
Great work! Thanks for saving the day!
Scheduled.
On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew < gregory.lee.bartholomew@gmail.com> wrote:
I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could not find the
button to do so in Wordpress.
Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and schedule it
sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot
anything else,
no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after
it goes live.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I don't
usually
sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read the
tips,
just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that
shouldn't be one (http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant to
be
something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP thing
though
I didn't notice it before.
Thanks Gregory
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew
wrote:
> Hi Stephen:
>
> I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to
bring
> it into
> better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using
> sentence case
> instead of title case):
>
>
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
>
> I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend
using
> sentence case for
> the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
>
> Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the
imperative tense
> to make
> the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO
happy. I
> don't think
> it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
>
> Can you view the current version of your article here?:
>
> https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
>
> Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think
might be
> poorly or
> incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image
now.
>
> On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
> > Hello Gregory,
> >
> > No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I
know that's
> > not
> > a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits
> > Silverblue
> > (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container
> > build/run
> > options. Perhaps something from the container world would
be
> > suitable.
> >
> > Stephen
> >
> > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew
wrote:
> > > Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request
your
> > > feedback. In the
> > > meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
> > >
> > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
> > > > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm
around
> > > > to
> > > > take
> > > > care of it.
> > > >
> > > > Stephen
> > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee
Bartholomew
> > > > wrote:
> > > > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the
practice
> > > > > anyway,
> > > > > so
> > > > > I'll give it
> > > > > a try.
> > > > >
> > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik
wrote:
> > > > > > Hi all,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of
the
> > > > > > desktops
> > > > > > from
> > > > > > Troy's
> > > > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't
be able
> > > > > > to do
> > > > > > that. :(
> > > > > >
> > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to
be
> > > > > > reviewed!
> > > > > > Would
> > > > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so
it's
> > > > > > ready
> > > > > > for
> > > > > > tomorrow?
> > > > > >
> > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning
if time
> > > > > > allows.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thanks!
> > > > > > Adam
> > > > > >
> > > > > > [1]
https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/
> > > > > > [2]
> > > > > >
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanb...
> > > > > >
> > > > > > --
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Adam Šamalík
> > > > > > ---------------------------
> > > > > > Senior Software Engineer
> > > > > > Red Hat
> > > > > > _______________________________________________
> > > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list --
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> > > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to
> > > > > > magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject.org
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> > > > > >
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> > > > > >
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines
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