I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with "I will.....".
The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm distance.
Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.
/Roger
Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme, however, the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit the theme.
You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.
Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a designer/artist, only an observer.
Thanks again for the work and efforts! Much appreciated!On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <niteshnarayanlalleo@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi all,
Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal
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