On Tue, 18 Jan 2011 08:32:50 -0800
Christopher Aillon <caillon(a)redhat.com> wrote:
> The collection of EPEL 6 packages is a complementary and
compatible
> add-on repository for RHEL 6 or compatible rebuilds. It provides
> additional packages and does not replace any RHEL 6 packages. EPEL
> is a community project, maintained and supported by volunteers via
> Bugzilla and mailing lists. It is part of the Fedora Project and is
> not commercially supported by Red Hat.
We should use "supplementary" instead of "complementary". There's
a
subtle difference in the meanings: the former connotes that a thing
is additional to the whole, whereas the latter connotes that the
whole is not complete without the thing.
Also, "Red Hat, Inc."?
Reasonable. I have made those changes.
I also have the current revision up at:
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Kevin/EPEL6_Announce_Draft
if folks would like to further edit or suggest changes.
Thanks!
kevin